观点1

一些精巧设计的建筑对人们的生活和工作有着很多积极影响：

-        设计精良的建筑比较节约能源同时也很环保，因为它们能很好地利用自然资源，比如阳光和水。

-        外部和内部设计美观的建筑能给员工停供更好的工作体验，并提升工作效率。

观点2

相反，一些粗制滥造的设计也能给人们的生活带来消极的影响：

1.     一些朝向和采光不好的建筑会让员工觉得困倦，影响工作效率。

2.     设计不好的建筑有的并不安全，甚至会危及人的性命。

开头段

The design of buildings has a significant

impact on people’s daily life and work,

and this essay will discuss both of the

positive and negative impacts of the

buildings.

主体段观点

Smartly designed buildings have a

multitude of positive effects on

people’s life and work.

解释说明1

 Firstly, well-designed buildings are

economical and environmentally

friendly, because they can make

good use of natural resources such

as sunlight and rain.

解释说明2

Secondly, buildings with appealing

exterior and interior design create

better working experience and

boost productivity.

过渡句

However, poorly designed buildings

inevitably have a negative impact

on people’s life and work.

解释说明1

To begin with, employees’ working

performance is closely related to

their working environment.

For example, buildings with

inappropriate orientation are short

of sunlight, which makes it easy for

employees to feel sleepy and tired.

解释说明2

Furthermore, poorly designed

buildings are unsafe and sometimes

can even threat people’s life.

结尾段

The design of buildings is of great

significance on people’s daily life,

and therefore architects should

design more smartly designed

buildings.