观点1

现代大众传媒的到来开拓了人们的眼界，并且让整个社会的文化更具接纳性

观点2

但是大众传媒所带来的信息革命带来了很多不可忽视的弊端：

- 孩子会接触到很多不利于他们身心发展的信息

- 国外的电影，电视节目让本地的文化和价值观受到侵蚀

- 人们日前所接受的信息量太大，信息的准确度和质量大打折扣

开头段

Mass media have completely

transformed how people get access

to information, and I do agree with

the view that this change has both

positive and negative impacts on

individuals and society.

主体段

观点

The advent of modern mass media has

broadened individuals’ horizons and

endowed the society with a more

accepting culture.

观点解释

This is because through mass media,

such as TV and radio, people can

know what is happening around the

world and learn about the culture and

traditions of other countries. 

观点进一步解释

For example, Discovery is an amazing

documentary that informs people of

the wonderfulness of the mother

nature. Through the documentary,

people can learn a lot about the

planet that they are living on. 

主体段并列观点

However, the negative impacts brought

about by information revolution cannot

be ignored.

观点解释

- To begin with, children are

inevitably exposed to information

that is harmful to their psychological

wellbeing.

- Moreover, with the introduction of

foreign films, movies and TV shows,

traditional cultures and values are

being eroded.

- Finally, people nowadays are faced

with information overload, which

means that the accuracy and quality

of information can hardly be

guaranteed.

结尾段

In conclusion, I agree that information

revolution brought by mass media has

its advantages and drawbacks.