观点1

在过去的100年中，的确其他发明比如抗生素和飞机确实十分重要。

- 抗生素帮助人们对抗危及生命的疾病，延长了人们的寿命。

- 飞机的产生让长途旅行成为可能，如今飞机已经成为一种不可或缺的旅行工具。

观点2

但是，电脑的产生彻底改变了人们的生活，如今电脑已经成为人们生活中不可或缺的一部分。

此外，电脑也是新科技研究，和其他科技产品诞生的基石。

开头段

Last century has witnessed the advent

of many inventions. I personally, believe

that the invention of computers is of the

greatest significance.

主体段

观点

Admittedly, other inventions such as

antibiotics and airplanes do make

people’s life easier.

观点的补充说明

This is because antibiotics make it

possible for people to survive from

life-threatening diseases and thus

prolong people’s life expectancy.

观点的补充说明

In addition, airplanes nowadays

serve as an essential tool for

people to travel between different

countries.

主体段观点1

However, computers have completely

transformed how people live and

become an indispensable part of

people’s daily life.

观点的补充说明

For example, in the present day,

people use computers to work,

study, order dishes and shop

online.

主体段观点2

In addition, computers serve as a

cornerstone for the research and

development of other new

technologies and products.

观点的补充说明

Without computers, it would be

impossible for scientists to do

calculations, build up models or

conduct research.

结尾段

In conclusion, inventions in the last 100

years have dramatically changed our

life, and among them the most

important invention is computers.

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