观点1

有很多不健康的生活习惯对人们的健康带来了巨大危害。

1.互联网的出现让人们沉迷于虚拟世界，这对人们的身体和心理健康都有一定危害。

2. 工作竞争压力大，让现代人以牺牲健康为代价争取工作时间。

3. 一些不良生活习惯比如吸烟和酗酒都影响了人们的身体健康。

观点2

国家健康服务部可以采取一系列的方式来解决这个问题。

1.  组织更多的户外活动，提倡健康的生活方式。

2. 做公益广告，让人们意识到健康生活方式的重要性。

3. 给市民奖励，鼓励人们摆脱不健康的生活习惯。

开头段

Lifestyle has a significant influence on

physical and mental wellbeing of

humans. This essay is going to explain

virous unhealthy lifestyles of modern

people and suggest solutions to solve

the problem.

主体段

观点

An array of unhealthy lifestyles has

posed server challenges to people’s

health.

分论点1

With the emergence of the Internet,

people are becoming addicted to

the virtual world, which threatens

their mental and physical health.

(example: social media & online

games)

分论点2

As competition for work is becoming

increasingly furious in modern

society, people tend to spend more

time on working at the cost of their

health. (example: unhealthy diet

& less exercise)

分论点3

Poor habits, such as smoking and

alcohol consuming, are another

factor that harms people’s health.

主体段观点

There are a few measures that the

National Health Service can take

to deal with the issue.

分论点1

Firstly, the authority should organise

more outdoor activities to promote

a healthy lifestyle. (example: sports

competition & festivals)

分论点2

Secondly, more public service

advertisements should be produced

to raise people’s awareness of how

important a healthy lifestyle is.

分论点3

Last but not least, the authority

should offer residents some

incentives, which is an effective way

to motivate people to get rid of poor

habits.

结尾段

In conclusion, unhealthy lifestyles are

harmful to people’s health. If the

National Health Service can take

effective measures to cope with the

issue, people will enjoy a healthier and

better life.