观点1

旅游对于教育，特别是年轻人的教育，起到至关重要的作用：

1.当旅行的时候，人们可以发现新的体验，碰到惊喜和一生只有一次的机遇。

2. 旅行能够激发起人们保护大自然的意识。

观点2

学者可能会有更多的理论知识，但是那些旅行者对于其他国家的文化，传统，历史有着更深的了解：

1.旅行让人们沉浸在另一个文化当中，只有通过这种方式人们才可以经历不同的生活方式和社会期待。

2.书本中的历史经常是偏颇的，只有通过亲自体验才能领悟历史的真谛。

开头段

Travel broadens people’s horizons and

opens people’s mind. I completely

agree that travel is an essential

component of education. Scholars who

stay at home do not necessarily have

more knowledge than those who love

travelling.

主体段观点

Travel serves as a crucial part of

education, especially the education

of young generation, because of

two reasons.

分论点1

When travelling, people can discover

infinite experiences, wonders and

once-in-a-lifetime opportunities.

分论点2

Travel inspires people to appreciate

and take   care of our mother nature.

主体段观点

Scholars may have more theoretical

knowledge, but those who love

travelling usually have a deeper

understanding about another

country’s culture, customs, traditions

and history.

分论点1

Travel makes it possible for people to

immerse themselves into another

culture. Only thorough this way can

people experience different manners,

customs and social expectations.

分论点2

History in textbooks is usually biased

and sometimes it skews towards a

particular cultural emphasis, while by

exploring   other parts of the world,

people can unearth the truth of

history.

结尾段

In conclusion, travel is an indispensable

part of education, and I believe that

those who travel have broader

knowledge than scholars who stay at

home.