观点1

首先，学校通过广告赚来的额外经费也能给学生带来好处。

- 比如学校可以用这些钱引进新的设备，买教学资料，或者雇佣有经验的老师。

观点2

其次，广告并不一定对孩子有害处，有的广告给孩子带来了有价值的信息和更多的选择。

- 比如电子书功能性就很强，便于携带，对于孩子的学习有帮助。

- 孩子们对于电子书的兴趣也能间接激发起孩子们对于学习的兴趣。

- 如果没有广告，学生就没有机会了解到这样好的产品，也就失去了使用它来学习的机会。

开头段

It is completely unnecessary to get rid of

advertisements placed in schools

because of two major reasons.

主体段观点

Firstly, children can benefit from the

additional funding earned from

school advertisements.

解释说明1

For example, the money can be used

to introduce new facilities, purchase

teaching materials or hire more

experienced teachers.

主体段观点2

Secondly, advertisements are not

necessarily harmful to children,

and some advertisements provide

useful information and more choices

for children and parents.

解释说明1

For example, e-readers such as

Kindle are functional, easy to

carry and beneficial for children’s

study.

解释说明2

Children’s curiosity about e-readers

may inspire their enthusiasm for

reading.

解释说明3

Without advertisements, students

would hardly have a chance to know

such an amazing product, thus

missing the chance to use it for

learning.

结尾段

In conclusion, I completely agree that

placing advertisements in school is a

great resource for public schools that

need additional funding.

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