【PTE学术干货】最新高频Writing Essay独家解析（十八：避免过度包装，消费者的责任还是制造商的责任？）,笔果英语微信公众号文章

Do you think consumers should avoid over-packaged products or it is the responsibility for manufacturers to avoid extra packaging? Give your views or any relevant examples based on your own experience.

题目分析

· 这篇文章为议论文，围绕的话题为产品的过度包装，旨在讨论是制造商的责任还是消费者的责任去避免过度包装的产品。

· 这篇题目并不难，文章已经给了现成的两个不会重叠的论述层面，可在各自的层面展开论述原因。

· 范文框架分成并列的讨论方式，先讲制造商有什么样的责任，再论述消费者的责任。

观点分析

观点1	产品制造商有责任放弃不必要的包装。 - 这是因为过度包装会导致环境的污染。 - 而环境污染反过来可能会增加产品制造和包装的制造成本。
观点2	消费者也有责任去拒绝过度包装产品的使用。 - 这是因为最终消费者需要为这些额外的包装成本买单。 - 消费者应该选择那些专注于产品质量的商家，而不是花大量的钱在包装上的商家。

范文示例

开头段	Both individuals and manufactures have the responsibility to avoid over-packaged products.

主体段观点	Manufactures have the obligation to get rid of unnecessary packaging.
解释说明1	This is because the mass production of over-packaging goods may lead to the contamination of the environment.
解释说明2	The pollution of the environment may in turn increase the cost of manufacturing products and their packages.

过渡句	Individuals also have the responsibility to resist over-packaged products.
解释说明1	This is because in the end it is the consumers who pay for the extra cost of packaging.
解释说明2	Consumers should choose the manufactures who focus on the quality of products rather than those who spend a huge amount of money on packaging.

结尾段	In conclusion, manufactures and consumers should work together to reduce overpackaging and protect the environment.

加分词汇

Obligation	责任
Get rid of	放弃
Mass production of …	……的大量生产
Contamination	污染
In turn	反过来
Resist	拒绝
Luxurious containers	奢华的包装盒
At the cost of	以牺牲……为代价
Be obliged to do	有义务做某事