【PTE学术干货】最新高频Writing Essay独家解析 (十二:运动和游戏是否影响学生的学习?)

2019年10月01日 笔果英语




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 考 试 真 题 


Sports and games create disturbance in students’ life because students cannot fully concentrate on their studies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


 题 目 分 析 


· 这篇文章为议论文,旨在让考生讨论运动是否对学生的生活造成干扰


· 本文须抓住的关键词为sports and games, disturbance, concentrate on their studies.


· 这篇文章可以采用并列式一边倒的写法,从两个角度来论述参加运动对于学习的促进作用,而并非对学习产生干扰


 观 点 分 析 


观点1

常规的体育运动会让学生对于学习更加专注。


- 运动需要记忆力,重复,学习和决心,所有这些技巧都会对学业产生促进的作用。


- 做运动对学生的意志力,身体和精神都有好处,在做完运动之后,学生一般会觉得精力充沛,这让他们在下课之后更容易集中注意力。

观点2

做运动和游戏能培养孩子的集体意识,这在小组学习中是必不可少的。


- 做运动能锻炼学生为自己设定计划,并且努力达到目标的能力,因为在体育锻炼中,他们看到了自己的努力得到回报。


- 在体育运动中,学生们需要和自己的伙伴交流和沟通,这就会大大促进他们的团队意识,而团队意识在小组学习中至关重要。


 范 文 示 例 


开头段

Sports and games are essential for

students to maintain their mental

and physical health, and I completely

disagree with the view that these

activities create disturbance in

students’ life. Instead, sports and

games can facilitate study and help

students achieve better academic

results.


主体段

观点

By doing regular physical activities,

students can better concentrate on

their study.

观点的补充说明

- Sports require memorization,

repetition, learning and

determination, and all of these

skills are directly relevant to

class work.


- Doing sports is beneficial to

students’ mind, body and spirit,

students usually feel refreshed and

energetic after doing sports, which

makes it easier for them to focus

on their study at school.


主体段观点

Sports and games boost self-esteem

and teach students how to build 

teamwork, which is required in group

learning.

观点的补充说明

- Achieving a sport goal encourages

students to achieve other goals they

set, because students will become

more confident when watching their

hard work pay off in sports and

games.


- In sports and games, students need

to communicate and cooperate with

other team members. During the

process they can develop teamwork

spirit, which is highly required in

group learning.


结尾段

In conclusion, based on the reasons

mentioned above, I strongly disagree

with the view that games and sports

can distract students and create

disturbance to their studies.


 加 分 词 汇 


Maintain

维持

Physical and

mental health

身心健康

Facilitate

促进

Achieve

获得

Academic results

学术成绩

Determination

决心

Be relevant to

和……相关

Refreshed  

焕然一新的

Energetic

充沛精力的

Boost self esteem

增强自信心

Teamwork spirit

团队精神

Distract

分散注意力

Persistent/

persistency

决心/坚持

Take precautions

采取措施


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