写作是雅思考生面临的一个大难题，语法书很厚，读不完怎么办？

不要紧，因为同学们常犯的错误大多具有典型性，归类总结，逐个击破是笔果帮助大家短期提分的利器！

笔果英语的Eileen老师根据批改的考生作文将常见的写作问题归为以下几类，并提供病因和正解，希望同学们能在错误中总结原因并且对症下药哦~

  ① 主 题 句  

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Secondly, some students cheat themselves and teachers in order to get good grades because if they have good grades, they can go to good schools.

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没有总结性，没有关键词，属于解释句，并没有直接回答原题中‘考试利和弊’的问题。

 < 正 解>  

1. 每个段落的第一句都要突出关键词，即题目要求论述的重点，在‘考试利和弊’中应突出的关键词为 ‘exams’

2. 段落首句应有总结性，短小精悍，直接回答问题。

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Another disadvantage is that the result of exams

cannot fully reflect a student’s academic        performance.

  ② 学 术 类 写 作 用 词 不 够 正 式  

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Secondly, some students cheat themselves and teachers in order to get good grades because if they have good grades, they can go to good schools.

 < 病 因 > 

学术类写作要求同学们使用FORMAL WORDS, 这句中的get是非常INFORMAL的用法。

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Secondly, some students cheat themselves and teachers in order to acquire good grades because if they achieve good grades, they can go to good schools.

  ③ 单 词 的 匮 乏 和 重 复  

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Secondly, some students cheat themselves and teachers in order to acquire good grades because if they achieve good grades, they can go to good schools.

 < 病 因 > 

在把get改成acquire 和achieve之后，这句仍然存在问题，就是单词的重复使用。比如grades出现了两次，good出现了三次。我们不主张同学们在写作中出现特别复杂的单词和句型，但是避免同样单词的频繁出现是有必要的。

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Secondly, some students cheat themselves and teachers in order to acquire high grades, because if 

they achieve an excellent academic result, they can go to a prestigious university.

  ④ 代 词  

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 Although it has some advantages, there’re are some disadvantages too.

 < 病 因 > 

代词放在主题句中，造成指代不明。使用代词前所指代的事物一定要先出现。而主题句是整段的第一句，因此不要在主题句中使用代词代替关键词。

 < 正 解>  

把关键词，也就是文章论述的主要事物写出来。

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Although exams are beneficial to students in some ways, their disadvantages are even more. 

  ⑤ 连 词  

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So I suggest that we can hold more tests for students.

But I think that it’s a not good way to examine students.

 < 病 因 > 

连词如 ‘but’, ‘and’, ‘so’ 在严谨的英文中，不能放在句子的开头，而是用来连接两个独立完整的句子。

 < 正 解>  

积累一些有相同意义的连接词如 ‘however’, ‘in addition’, ‘therefore’. 这些词的词性为副词，均可放在句首使用，却不能连接两个独立完整的句子。

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Therefore, I suggest that we should hold more tests for students.

However, I think that it is not a good way to test students.

  ⑥ 词 汇 精 准 度  

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 Many bad students never pay attention to their study but before a test.

…, because if they have good grades, they can go to good schools.

It’s unfair for good students and they may lose confident.

 < 病 因 > 

形容词积累贫乏，多用good 和bad这样泛而空的词。

 < 正 解>  

尽量用更为具体化的形容词，将意思表达得更精确。

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If they have satisfactory grades, they can go to prestigious schools.

It is unfair for hardworking students, and they may lose confidence.

  ⑦ 单 数 可 数 名 词  

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I think the tests are not all aspect.

 < 病 因 > 

单数可数名词词尾习惯性不加‘s’

 < 正 解>  

培养自己在单数可数名词词尾加‘s’的习惯。

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Tests cannot reflect all aspects of a student.

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