【PTE学术干货】最新高频Writing Essay独家解析 (六:Medical Technology)

原创 2019年08月15日 笔果英语




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 考 试 真 题 


Medical technology has increased people’s life expectancy. Is it a blessing or curse?


 题 目 分 析 


· 这篇文章为议论文,重点在于讨论医疗科技能够延长人们寿命的有点和缺点


· 同学们再写这篇文章的时候容易进入一个误区,就是只谈医疗科技的优缺点,而忽视了其实论述的主题应该是医疗科技延长人们寿命这件事


· 文章中需要突出三个关键词Medical technology/increase/life expectancy 才能把握住content的分数


· 文章可以用一边倒的写法,也可以双边讨论,范文示例推荐大家使用先抑后扬双边讨论的方式,先写这件事情的好处,再讨论这件事情的坏处


 观 点 分 析 


观点1

医疗科技能让人们的寿命更长,人们有更多的时间去享受生活

观点2

寿命延长导致生命后期的生活质量下降

观点3

寿命延长导致社会老龄化,会引起很多社会问题


 范 文 示 例 


开头段

People nowadays live longer thanks to

the development of medical technology.

Although it has certain advantages,

I personally believe that it is a curse.


主体段

观点1

Admittedly, advanced medical

technology makes it possible for people

to live longer and have more time to

enjoy life. 

观点1解释

This is because numerous diseases

can be managed and cured, which

means that the pain caused by illness

can be significantly reduced. 


主体段

过渡句

However, the drawbacks of longer life

span far outweigh its merits.

观点1

Firstly, prolonging life expectancy

may compromise the quality of life

that people have in their final years.

For example, some patients, though

they can live longer with the help of

medication and therapy, are still in

weakness in the late years of their life.

They have to rely on the medical

technology and cannot leave the hospital.

观点2

Secondly, an ageing society will

emerge, slowing down the economic

growth and imposing a huge financial

burden on families and governments.


结尾段

In conclusion, although prolonging life

expectancy has certain merits, overall

it has more negative impacts on

individuals and the society.


 加 分 词 汇 


Manage disease 

控制疾病

Cure disease

治愈疾病

Life expectancy 

寿命

Life span 

寿命

Compromise 

使……打折

Medication 

药物

Therapy

治疗

Ageing society 

老龄化社会

Emerge 

出现

Impose… on …

把…强加到…

Prolong 

延长

Drawbacks

缺点

Merits 

优点



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