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Chinese internet users have posted photos online to show they are "paper thin", sparking debate around the world about standards of beauty.

【点评】跟我们说烂的作文开头相比，这个句式有木有豁然开朗的赶脚？

The social media craze 狂热 has seen women hold up a piece of A4 paper vertically树立地, to cover their waists. Chinese state newspaper People's Daily described it as a "fitness challenge". But people in China and elsewhere have responded with their own photos, arguing that a 21cm (8.3 inch) waist is unhealthy and unrealistic.

【点评】展开与解释现状。继而，马上话锋一转，引出反对的声音。

The craze began on social networks such as Weibo and WeChat, with users such as actress Zhang Li posting photos, before going global （go 也是一个系动词，故此可与形容词搭配） on Twitter and Instagram. Posting under the hashtags（社交网站名）, many internet users showed their disdain 鄙夷 for the trend. Others found creative ways to underline 强调 the unrealistic nature of the challenge.

【点评】举例描述现象，对比不同观点。

The A4 waist challenge is not the first unusual online beauty craze emphasising thinness to emerge出现 from China. Previous challenges have included showing off prominent collarbones 凸出的锁骨 by balancing rows of coins on them and the "belly button 肚脐 challenge".

【点评】对主题加以佐证，来表明作者的观察与立场。

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