嗨~ 同学们，今天的笔果语法云讲堂中，
我们依旧为大家总结了大家写作当中的常见错误，
并基于这些错误帮大家理清下面几个要点:
1. 什么叫作表达的冗长和赘余？
2. 如何凝练准确地使用英文表达？
3. 为什么英文写作中尽量避免使用‘things’这个词？
4. 句子如何拆分表达更地道和具体？
一起来找茬：
One of the main reasons which causes the traffic jam is that the majority of people prefer using their own cars instead of public transportation.
There have all kinds of information with positive and negative things on the website.
错误点：
One of the main reasons which causes the traffic jam is that the majority of people prefer using their own cars instead of public transportation.
There have all kinds of information with positive and negative things on the website.
修改后：
One of the main reasons for traffic jam is that the majority of people prefer using their own cars instead of public transportation.
The website has a wide range of information. For example, there are study materials, practical skills, positive and negative comments on news and so on.
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