【PTE学术干货】最新高频Writing Essay独家解析 (二:Culture)

原创 2019年07月30日 笔果英语



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【PTE学术干货】最新高频Writing Essay独家解析 (一:Advertisement)



 考 试 真 题 


It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?


 题 目 分 析 


· 这篇题目是一篇PTE写作老题,为典型的议论文,考察学生的辩证性思维


· 紧密围绕题目中关键词preserve, beautiful buildings of the past, expensive论述才能在content上面获得满分


· 本篇议论文既可以采用两边论述的方式,也可以采用一边倒的论证方式


· 本话题可分为A面:保留老的建筑花销很大 B面:尽管如此,也要保留这些建筑


· 以下例文框架建议大家用先抑后扬的写法,先承认确实保留这些建筑非常的‘expensive’,再介绍尽管如此仍然值得保留的原因


 观 点 分 析 


A 面

· 保留老建筑意味着政府必须花费巨大的人力和财力,这将会给政府带来巨大的财政负担。

B 面

· 老建筑是一个国家的文化遗产,代表一个国家的文化,历史和习俗。


· 老建筑是城市的地标,能够吸引来自各地的游客,拉动旅游业,增加本地政府的收入。


 范 文 示 例 


Introduction

Thesis

statement 

Although preserving old buildings is 

expensive, I believe it is still

necessary to do so, because these

buildings represent a country’s

culture and are the landmarks of a

city.


Body 

paragraph

1

Topic

sentence

Admittedly, preserving old buildings

means that governments have to

take a huge amount of money from

government revenue.

Body 

paragraph

1

Further

 explanation

This means that a large amount of

tax income has to be pooled into

this project, and the government

may not have enough funds when

emergent issues happen. 


Body

paragraph

2

Transitional

sentence

However, it is worthwhile to preserve

the old buildings.

Body

paragraph

2

Topic

sentence 1

Firstly, old buildings are cultural

heritages which represent a country’s

culture, custom and history.

Body

paragraph

2

Topic

sentence 2

Secondly, beautiful buildings of the

past are the landmarks of a city and

attract numerous visitors from other

regions.

Body

paragraph

2

Topic

sentence 3

Last but not least, maintaining old

buildings means that new positions

will be created, and the employment

rate will be increased.


 加 分 词 汇 


Historical buildings

历史建筑

Convey the culture, 

custom and history

承载着文化,

习俗和历史

Landmarks of a city 

城市的地标

Cultural identity

文化身份

Cultural heritage

文化遗产

Tax revenue

政府税务收入

Worthwhile

值得的

Remind sb. of sth. 

让某人想起某事

The boom of tourism 

旅游业的繁荣发展

Maintain 

维护

Human resources 

人力资源

Employment rate

就业率

New positions 

新的岗位



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