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考 试 真 题
It is important to preserve the beautiful buildings of the past, even if it will be expensive to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?
题 目 分 析
· 这篇题目是一篇PTE写作老题,为典型的议论文,考察学生的辩证性思维
· 紧密围绕题目中关键词preserve, beautiful buildings of the past, expensive论述才能在content上面获得满分
· 本篇议论文既可以采用两边论述的方式,也可以采用一边倒的论证方式
· 本话题可分为A面:保留老的建筑花销很大 B面:尽管如此,也要保留这些建筑
· 以下例文框架建议大家用先抑后扬的写法,先承认确实保留这些建筑非常的‘expensive’,再介绍尽管如此仍然值得保留的原因
观 点 分 析
A 面 | · 保留老建筑意味着政府必须花费巨大的人力和财力,这将会给政府带来巨大的财政负担。 |
B 面 | · 老建筑是一个国家的文化遗产,代表一个国家的文化,历史和习俗。 · 老建筑是城市的地标,能够吸引来自各地的游客,拉动旅游业,增加本地政府的收入。 |
范 文 示 例
Introduction Thesis statement | Although preserving old buildings is expensive, I believe it is still necessary to do so, because these buildings represent a country’s culture and are the landmarks of a city. |
Body paragraph 1 Topic sentence | Admittedly, preserving old buildings means that governments have to take a huge amount of money from government revenue. |
Body paragraph 1 Further explanation | This means that a large amount of tax income has to be pooled into this project, and the government may not have enough funds when emergent issues happen. |
Body paragraph 2 Transitional sentence | However, it is worthwhile to preserve the old buildings. |
Body paragraph 2 Topic sentence 1 | Firstly, old buildings are cultural heritages which represent a country’s culture, custom and history. |
Body paragraph 2 Topic sentence 2 | Secondly, beautiful buildings of the past are the landmarks of a city and attract numerous visitors from other regions. |
Body paragraph 2 Topic sentence 3 | Last but not least, maintaining old buildings means that new positions will be created, and the employment rate will be increased. |
加 分 词 汇
Historical buildings | 历史建筑 |
Convey the culture, custom and history | 承载着文化, 习俗和历史 |
Landmarks of a city | 城市的地标 |
Cultural identity | 文化身份 |
Cultural heritage | 文化遗产 |
Tax revenue | 政府税务收入 |
Worthwhile | 值得的 |
Remind sb. of sth. | 让某人想起某事 |
The boom of tourism | 旅游业的繁荣发展 |
Maintain | 维护 |
Human resources | 人力资源 |
Employment rate | 就业率 |
New positions | 新的岗位 |
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