各位学霸们好,今天黄老师照例给大家分享一下上周六(2020.12.12)雅思大作文真题解析。上周真题如下:
2020.12.12真题
Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
同学们注意了,该题有陷阱哦!首先我们还是仔细按照三部曲的方法审题:
第一步 - 决定问题类型:
该问题为个人观点类题目。这类题目同学们可以写一边倒或者是让步法,取决于每边能否想到足够的论点。而且,该题为闭合型逻辑,即:名人的奢华生活 - 给年轻人树立了坏榜样。同学们只能在这个闭环中讨论。
第二步 - 决定题干核心词:
该题核心词为:celebrities / glamour and wealth / bad example / young people。同学们一定要记住,我们写的是名人对于年轻人的影响;而不是对于其他人或者社会的!!
第三步 - 构思结论:
该题黄老师推荐写让步法,这样从逻辑上来说比较不极端,而且容易构思出足够的点,整体结构可以为这样:(也可以自行构思其他论点)
让步段1 - 名人通过他们奢华的生活可以激励年轻人。
支持段2 - 年轻人会觉得普通的工作没有价值。
支持段3 - 会给年轻人树立一个错误的道德价值观。
结论:虽然有好处,但是整理弊大于利。
那么,带着这样的思路,同学们看看黄老师的支持段范文吧(注:该题黄老师参考了之前摘抄的报纸期刊好词好句,全部都积累在《雅培雅思满分句型整理》上,同学们需要的可以找黄老师免费领取哦!)
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满分词汇:
net worth n. 净资产
monetary adj. 金钱的
worthiness n. 价值度
modest adj. 平庸的
material wealth n. 物质价值
moral value n. 道德价值
支持段1:
On one hand, celebrities, along with their unattainable lifestyles - snaps of designer clothes, hyper cars or even private jets - are what teenagers nowadays aspire to. This has glorified the wealthy to adolescents by tracking one’s value and worthiness to society solely on its monetary worth. On the other hand, although many of the top athletes, actors and performers deserve their multi-million-dollar pay cheques — most are incredibly talented and diligent, there are also far less paid occupations, such as childcare workers, teachers, nurses, and plenty of other workers, also bring skills and strong work ethics to their respective fields and contribute to the public good. Therefore, it will be likely for kids nowadays to deem such professions as undesirable based on their modest incomes.
支持段2:
The other very worst thing is that such phenomenon can confuse children success with material wealth, as renowned public figure, because of their massive salaries, will simply, maybe unconsciously, feel that they are worth more, not just in material terms, but in terms of moral value or contribution to society, which can easily be spotted on social media and is extremely misleading to teenagers.
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