本周(2020.12.5)雅思大作文真题范文&解析

原创 2020年12月07日 IPENGLISH黄老师



 

各位学霸们好,今天黄老师继续为大家带来本周六(2020.12.05)雅思大作文真题高分段落 & 解析。

 

本周考题

 

  







本周考题为:(2012年原题)

More government investment should be on the teaching of science than any other subjects in order to keep a country's development and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

p.s. 这道题也为雅培写作保分班原题,考到的学生们有福啦!

 

那么,首先我们还是来分析一下题目中的陷阱和关键信息:















题目解析

  







第一步 - 决定问题类型:

该问题为原因+比较类题目,我们得同时提到为什么投资科学科目和投资其他科目;同学们请切记千万不要只写某一边,而忽略了另一边。

 

第二步 - 决定题干核心词:

该题核心词为:government investment / subject / science / other。同学们一定要记住,我们写的是为什么政府要投资到某个科目上的原因;而不是单纯的某个科目的好处是什么,一定要扯到政府投资上!!(同学们可以参考一下范文中黄老师是如何联系到这些核心词的)

 

第三步 - 构思结论

对于这种比较绝对的题型,黄老师推荐写让步否定结论;即政府需要投资在科学项目上;但是同时也需要平等的投资到其他的科目中。文章结构可以为如下结构:

中间段1 - 为什么政府要投资在科学学科上

中间段2 & 3 - 为什么政府要平等投资在其他学科上

 

那么,带着这样的思路,我们一起来看看范文段落和高分词汇吧!














满分词汇和支持段/反对段


黄威老师

雅培英语名师


满分词汇:


increasingly technologically and scientifically advanced world科技日益发达的社会

to be scientifically literate受到科学教育

hands-on adj. 切身实际的

subsidy n. 补贴

life skills 生活技能

aggravate v. 恶化

marginalization n. 边缘化


支持段:


As children grow up in an increasingly technologically and scientifically advanced world, they need to be scientifically literate to succeed, which involves activities such as hands-on labs and experiments. Most of such activities are relatively too costly to be sustained by many schools unless government offers subsidies selectively to schools lacking essential funding.

 

反对段:


However, similar to math, which is not merely about being good with numbers, but also helps to enhance creative problem-solving skills. A variety of marginalized subjects, such as art and music, do not necessarily refer only to painting or playing an instrument; instead, these classes enable students to develop greater life skills such as perspective, cultural understanding and creativity. If government shifts its focus away from these subjects, it will aggravate the marginalization of them by schools and parents, making it impossible for children to acquire such skills essential for their future.



 

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