本周雅思大作文考题《机器人取代人类》解析+范文段落,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来本周六（2020.10.10）雅思大作文真题解析。咱们先来看题目：

题目说明

Today, there are many tasks at home or work have been done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

这道题看似简单，但是有！陷！阱！所以请同学们牢记黄老师的三步审题法：

题目说明

第一步：决定问题类型

该题问的好处坏处，所以为结果型题目。题目并没有问这件事会不会发生，所以千万不要写类似‘我认为机器人最终不能取代人’巴拉巴拉，写一个挂一个！

第二步：决定题干核心词

该题核心词为：

today（千万不要写成：in the future, more and more jobs will be replaced by robots了！！！！）

home & work（作答中必须同时点到home和work，不能只写一个。）

第三步：构思论点展开

切记：写结果，写现在，同时点到家庭和工作！

同样的，对于这道题来说，我们尽量能够选择在该话题中比较精确地道的词汇，而不是用简单词，或者一味的使用不符合语境的难词。

满分句型举例分析

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以下为黄老师提供的满分词汇：（来源于《雅培雅思写作保分班内部资料》）

lower-skilled / higher-skilled adj. 低/高技术的

displace v. 顶替

squeeze v. 压榨

automation n. 自动化

eliminate v. 消除

带着这些词汇，我们来看看黄老师提供的高分【工作-坏处段】：同学们可以理解性记忆哦！

Millions of lower-skilled jobs around the world have been replaced by robots in recent decades, and people displaced from those jobs are likely to find that comparable roles have also been squeezed by automation. Although advocates for robotic automation routinely point to the fact that robots cannot service or program themselves yet, which will in theory create new, high-skilled jobs for technicians, programmers and other newly essential roles. However, for every job created by robotic automation, several more might be eliminated entirely, leaving a devastating impact on general workforce.