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2016年08月13日 雅学粉思


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高分例文解析:

交通问题,曾经是雅思写作考试中最热门的话题之一。在今天的考试中恰恰就是考的它!在雅思写作考试中,关于交通的写作题,大致可以分为两大类:1.各种交通工具的利和弊;2.如何改善交通状况。


这道题目要求考生叙述自行车的利和弊,是典型的“正反叙述”类雅思作文题。实际考试中,推荐考生使用这篇高分范文所采用的这种传统的“四段法”来写这篇文章:第一段引入话题;第二段列举自行车各种优势;第三段列举自行车的各种弊端;第四段给出作者自己的观点或者喜好。



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题目

有人认为自行车是最方便的交通工具。请讨论自行车的利弊。

Some people think that bicycle is the best way to travel from place to place. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the bicycle.

Nowhere(无处, adv) are bikes more widely used than in China. About 300 million bikes are being used daily around the country, mainly for transport purposes. Indeed, I would certainly cycle to work if I lived nearer to my workplace.

 

Riding a bike contributes to our health. At the very least, cycling burns calories. In fact, it does much more. Cycling helps to train our hand-eye-feet coordination and sharpens our sense of balance. It is easy to learn and not physically demanding. It is probably the best sport for overweight people. Besides, the air will be a lot cleaner if more people choose to use bikes instead of cars. Bicycle is the most environment-friendly means of transport except for walking, which has the intolerable(无法忍受的, adj) downside(底侧的,adj) of being too slow. Actually, due to traffic congestion(堵塞,n), cycling is often the quickest way to reach your destination. Apart from being clean and quick, cycling is safe. This means safety for ourselves and others. In light of the actual speed at which a bike usually travels, the likelihood of a collision with pedestrians and fellow cyclists is minimal. Even in the event of such an accident, people involved usually get away with a few scratches at the worst.

 

Having said that, a more critical rider may find a bike less than satisfactory. For example, it can’t shield against rain or dust; the saddle(鞍,n) is often uncomfortable. Besides, bikes are unfit for long distance travel. After all, most people can't ride more than 20 miles at a stretch.

 

Taken all together, the bicycle is indeed a brilliant human invention. Unlike many other devices, bike reinforces(加强,vt) our reliance on ourselves both physically and mentally. This never fails to fascinate(使着迷,vt) me.



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