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高分例文解析：

特别提醒

大学教育，是雅思写作考试中出现频率最高的话题，是考生绝对不可以不忠实的话题。每一年的雅思考试中，大学教育的话题都会出现若干次。

写作点拨

这道雅思写作题目不仅要求考生给出大学的主要功能，还要求考生指出大学教育的必备内容。考生首先需要决定将写作重点放在“功能”还是“必备内容”上。范文分成四段：第一段引入话题；第二、三段介绍大学的各种主要功能；第四段叙述大学教育的必备内容。考生也可以把文章写成三小段，分别为话题引入、主要功能和必备内容；当然也可以写成四段，用两段来叙述大学教育的各类必备内容。

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题目

大学的主要功能是什么:为学生提供职场必备的知识和技术，还是为学生提供获取知识的途径？你认为大学教育必须包括什么？

What are the main tasks of universities: to offer students knowledge and skills essential for their future career, or to provide students with access to knowledge itself? What do you think university education should contain?

Universities around the world are now facing the problem of how to efficiently use their resources to serve a large population of students that are more culturally and socially diversified（多样化的adj.）. To solve the problem, universities should be perfectly aware of their main tasks: providing students with easy access to knowledge and, at the same time, encouraging them to make active contribution to the advancement of human knowledge.

Universities should, first of all, be learning communities where knowledge is not only disseminated(散布，传播v.) but also advanced. As full-fledged(完全合格adj.) members of this community, students should not be information recipients who learn the knowledge in a passive way. Instead, they should be challenged to achieve their potential and, indeed, to excel（超越v.）. Therefore, rather than focus merely on knowledge dissemination and transfer, universities should contrive to provide learning conditions that encourage students to remain curious, to value diversity in opinions and perspectives（观点n.）, and to think critically and communicate effectively. In this way, students can gain problem-solving experience and confidence.

Furthermore, universities will never attain their goals if they tailor all their courses or programs to meet the needs of specific employers or occupational sectors. Today’s social environment is more dynamic(动态的adj.) and turbulent（动荡的adj.） than ever before. Only those graduates who possess certain personality traits and can do well in diversified situations can distinguish themselves from other job applicants.

In order to fulfill the main tasks of universities, university education should contain amply opportunities for independent learning which can cultivate students who are more likely to adapt to the changing society. Students can also learn to exercise their autonomy(自主n.) more effectively, and they may clarify their own professional interests while learning in an independent way.

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雅学学员冲刺高分破纪录，短短2周时间即获得（7.5;8.0;7.0;7.5）的惊人高分。近期高分班也是喜讯频出，学员经过一个月不到的学习时间从6分跃升至（8.5；8.5；7.5；7.0）。

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