雅思PTE黄老师 | 9月24日雅思真题【机器人与人工比较】 满分段落解析

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各位学霸们好,今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下上周六(2022.9.24)雅思大作文真题解析,上周又考到《雅培英语雅思满分范文合辑》的原题了哦!

考题如下:

2022.9.24真题 (2020.10.10重复)

Today, there are many tasks at home or work have been done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?

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题目讲解

机器人的题目每年基本上都要出现一次,这里黄老师总结了之前很多同学犯过的错误:

1. 机器人 ≠ 人工智能/机器/电脑/互联网/自动化,展开论述时千万不要混淆

2. 题目有时会有work and life/home的限定,如果有则工作生活都要论述

3. 该类题目用比较思维容易写的出彩(e.g. 机器人比人工更……)


同时,对于这类题目,词句上很容易落入俗套,比如:

❎ 5分:Robots do not need to rest, so they can make more products than humans.

✅ 7分:robotics, which are able to operate continuously (持续工作), are exponentially(指数级) more productive (生产效率) even than the most seasoned workers (老练技工).


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那么,接下来我们来看真题范例段落吧:(这里黄老师列出一个缺点点,同学们可以仔细理解背诵)


2022.9.24真题 (2020.10.10重复)

Today, there are many tasks at home or work have been done by robots. Is this a positive or negative development?


满分词汇:

lower-skilled / higher-skilled adj. 低/高技术的

displace v. 顶替

squeeze v. 压榨

automation n. 自动化

eliminate v. 消除

坏处段:

Millions of lower-skilled jobs around the world have been replaced by robots in recent decades, and people displaced from those jobs are likely to find that comparable roles have also been squeezed by automation. Although advocates for robotic automation routinely point to the fact that, for the most part, robots cannot service or program themselves – yet, which will, in theory, create new, high-skilled jobs for technicians, programmers and other newly essential roles. However, for every job created by robotic automation, several more will be eliminated entirely, leaving a devastating impact on general workforce.



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