【干货】G类小作文,满分例文

2016年07月25日 雅学粉思


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Topic
  You live in a room in college which you share with another student. You find it very difficult to work there because your room-male always has friends visiting. He/she has parties in the room and sometimes borrows your things without asking you.
 
  Write a letter to the Accommodation Officer at the college and ask for a new room next term. You would prefer a single room. Explain your reasons.
 
  You should write at least 150 words.
 
  You do NOT need to write your own address.
 
  Begin your letter as follows;
 
  Dear……………

例文
  Dear Sir or Madam
 
  I am writing to inform you that I wish to move into a new room next term. I would prefer a single room, as I find the present sharing arrangement inconvenient .
 
  I must explain that the reason for my dissatisfaction is my room-mate’s inconsiderate behavior. For one thing, his friends are constantly visiting him; for another, he regularly holds noisy parties. In addition, he sometimes borrows my things without asking me. In these circumstances. I find it difficult to concentrate on my studies, and I am falling behind in my assignments.
 
  I am sure you will agree that the only solution is for me to move into a room of my own, where I will be free from such distractions . Therefore, I would be grateful if you could find a single room for me, preferably not in the same building but as near to the college campus as possible.
 
Yours sincerely.

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