上周六(2021.3.6)雅思大作文真题&范文解析

原创 2021年03月09日 IPENGLISH黄老师



各位学霸们好,今天黄老师照例给大家带来上周六(2021.03.06)雅思大作文真题解析&范文。上周考题如下:

 

In some countries around the world men and women tend to have their children later in life. Why this happened? What are the effects on society and family life?

 


思路分析

 

  







上周又考了report类型的话题,针对report话题的几个注意点黄老师在上一期的雅思大作文真题解析中已经提过,还没有看的同学们请一定看一下,这些注意点非常重要!

 

对于这道题,同学们需要注意的为题干的核心词society和family life。这意味着在我们写影响的时候,必须同时提到对于社会和家庭的影响,类似的限定词同学们在审题时千万不要忽略掉了!否则就时跑题的文章(会被考官降档处理)。

 

同时,这道题因为问的话题比较专业,所以对于同学们的词汇有一定的要求,比如,同学们会如何替换have their children later in life呢?这里可以换成:

postpone parenthood 或者later ages of childbearing

 

这些词都需要同学们在平时针对考试真题进行积累的,否则在写作的时候容易出现思路语法过关,但是因为词汇太low而导致挂掉的情况。对于这篇文章,大家可以背诵一下黄老师下面范文中用的好词好句,这些范文都是黄老师参考英文网站上的杂志/期刊/报纸写出来的,词句都可以直接背诵,作为大家自己的积累。

 

那么,接下来我们就一起来看范文吧!














 

满分词汇 和 好处段


黄威老师

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2021.03.06真题

In some countries around the world men and women tend to have their children later in life. Why this happened? What are the effects on society and family life?

满分词汇

postpone parenthood / later ages of childbearing 替代晚生孩子

fertility n. 生育能力

inverse impact n. 负面影响

simultaneously adv. 同时地

well established adj. 走上正轨

maturity n. 成熟

opt for v. 选择

 

原因段1

Education could have a strong inverse impact on the timing of first births, resulting in a significant shift to later ages of childbearing. Young adults who desire higher educational attainment levels are likely to postpone parenthood because of the hardship in balancing student and parent roles, both are time-intensive and difficult to be managed simultaneously. Sheer evidence can be found from those with a higher post-secondary or tertiary education who had their first child considerably later than those with lower secondary education only.

 

原因段2

Furthermore, Young couples nowadays are likely to pursue careers, which means they will encounter a series of job steps that progressively entail more responsibility in pursuing of higher remuneration and greater authority and autonomy. Those willing to pursue careers may post pone childbearing until they are well established on their career path.

 

影响段1&2

There's an undoubted sense of maturity that comes along with age and plays a vital role in better parenting.Older parents, who tend to opt for more sophisticated parenting approaches due to their maturity, are less likely to scold or physically discipline their kids, which means it will be more likely for their children to be better behaved, well socialized and emotionally healthy in their pre-teen years. In addition, later parenthood can be a key contributor of declining fertility, which accelerates the already severe aging population in the globe. This can in turn leads to a discontinuity in labor force across the spectrum of various sectors.

 




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