本周六(2021.01.16)雅思大作文真题范文&解析

原创 2021年01月17日 IPENGLISH黄老师



各位学霸们好,今天黄老师给大家带来本周六(2021.01.16)雅思大作文真题和范文解析。本周考题如下:

 

Students leave high school without learning a way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?


 

思路分析

 

  







本周题目类似为较为少见的report类型题目,需要同学们论述原因和解决措施。Report类型题目逻辑比较简单,但是大家请切记千万不要写成好处/坏处;或者同意/不同意了。

 

一般来说,该类题目需要同学们每个问题都至少回应2个点(问题带复数),即:

-      原因1

-      原因2

-      解决1(对应原因1)

-      解决2(对应原因2)

 

对于这道题,黄老师推荐大家可以从家庭和学校两个角度入手,家庭原因和如何解决,以及学校原因和如何解决(注意:文章写写完原因段再写解决段。)这里黄老师把家庭的原因和解决方法的范文写出来了,同学们可以作为参考,范文如下:(参考了Forbes - How To Start Your Child On An Allowance Program)















 

满分词汇和真题 原因段/解决段


黄威老师

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2021.01.16真题

Students leave high school without learning a way how to manage their money. What are the reasons and solutions to this issue?

满分词汇

allowance n. 零花钱

adolescent n. 青少年

spoiled adj. 惯坏了

overindulge v. 放松 溺爱

excessive adj. 过量的

comprehend v. 理解

chores n. 杂务

impactful adj. 有影响力的

tangible adj. 实际的,切实的

 

原因段1

One of the contributing factors can be lack of appropriate allowance scheme at home, which is of great importance in helping teenagers learn about personal finance. It is not uncommon that many adolescents are spoiled by their parents, being overindulged with excessive amount of pocket money. These kids are likely to grow up without comprehending that costly goals require sacrifice nor the importance of future saving and investing.

 

解决段1

Parents can pay their children to do chores, which is one of the most impactful ways to teach children about monetary value. It's also the first exposures teenagers have to earning money, and can shape their attitudes around money. Such method allows children to have a tangible sense of the degree of effort from which they can be rewarded with allowance accordingly, which allows them to use money wisely in the future.

 



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