雅思高分作文赏析——大众传媒：名人隐私,雅学粉思微信公众号文章

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特别提醒

大众传媒话题一直是雅思写作考试中最热门的话题之一。这道关于名人和大众传媒的关系的雅思作文题目，甚至在托福和GRE的写作考试中都出现过，请仔细阅读范文并注意收集和整理相关的论据。

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这道题目要求考生就“大众传媒是否侵犯了名人的隐私”给出自己的观点，是典型的观点类雅思作文题。范文使用了最传统的观点类议论文写作方法，全文分为四段：首段引入话题并且给出作者的观点，即媒体的过分报道侵犯了名人的隐私；第二第三段指出名人的隐私也不可以侵犯的原因；末尾段重申作者的观点。

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题目

名人是否受到了媒体的不公正对待？他们应该有更多的隐私，还是说失去隐私是成名的代价呢？

Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private lives?

Press freedom allows journalists to report nearly everything. But nothing receives more press coverage than the famous: movie stars, top athletes, models and so on. This kind of inordinate（过量的，adj） attention intrudes（侵入, v） upon their private lives and should be curbed(遏制, v）.

People, including celebrities, have the right to keep their private life private, which should be respected by nosy reporters. It is their right not to tell you what kind of food they are eating or what books they are reading. They have the right to “remain silent”. Who they are dating is their own business and they can choose whether or not to divulge（透露, v） that information. When they are not inclined to be interviewed or photoed, they should be left alone. The tragic death of Princess Diana reveals once again how much damage those nosy paparazzi（狗仔队, n） can cause. There are many famous people being molested by incessant（不断的，adj） media attention.

The famous are often the victims of sensationalism（哗众取宠, n） and tabloid（小报，n） journalism. They are being used to attract more audience and to boost the sales. The stories about celebrities may have no newsworthiness in an objective sense but usually cater to popular tastes. People are naturally curious and particularly love to read about and see the rich and the famous. They like to find in them what is lacking in their own ordinary lives. They want to experience some vicarious pleasure and excitement of their trendy（流行的, adj） life. The intrusion upon the privacy of the rich is profit-driven on the side of mass media and a touch of voyeurism on the side of common readers.

There are, however, some people who do seek the limelight（公众焦点，n）. They pride themselves on the amount of attention they get and would even create some scandals（丑闻，n） to get on the headlines. There is no need to protect their privacy. But for the vast majority, the famous or the common, privacy should not be intruded upon.

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