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高分例文解析：

教育问题是雅思考试中最热门的话题之一。教育问题通常涉及到儿童以及成人教育的方方面面。这道作文题所涉及的教育方面的内容，与其他的教育类雅思写作题有很大的不同，请用心整理文章中出现的论据及其英文表达。

这道题目要求考生就“学生是否应该评估自己的老师”发表自己的看法，是典型的观点类雅思作文题。范文的写法有别于最传统的观点类议论文的写作方法。范文分为四段：首段引入话题；第二段是让步段，列出反对学生对教室进行评估的理由；第三段从不同方面给出学生应该参与教室评估的原因；第四段重申作者的观点并且进行全文的总结。

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有人认为，为了提高教育质量，我们应该鼓励高中生对自己的老师进行评估；其他人却认为这种评估会造成不尊重老师，违反学校纪律的行为。请给出你的看法。

Some people think that in order to improve the quality of education, hight school students should be encouraged to evaluate and criticize their teachers, but other people maintain that such evaluation and criticism may cause loss of respect for teachers and discipline. What do you think?

Students are nowadays regarded as the most important element of education. So students in some high schools now enjoy the right to evaluate and criticize their teachers to guarantee better teaching from the instructors. Naturally, such practice draws criticism from many conservatives(保守的adj;保守派n) who insist that evaluation and criticism, from students interfere(干涉, vi) with the normal teaching process.

They do have their reasons. Firstly, teachers have a syllabus（课程提纲,n） to follow and criticism from students may prevent it from being implemented. Second, negative evaluation from the students could harm the relationship between teachers and students. And excessive（过分的，adj） criticism may even breed resentment and hostility at schools.

Though not entirely groundless, these concerns are just unfounded worries. If students are not allowed to evaluate or criticize the teacher, it is hard for the teacher to find out what the students think or what they need. Without proper feedback from the students, the classroom becomes a place where students are crammed（填满,v） with knowledge considered useful, yet in fact, of little benefit or interest to them. Though the syllabus is set by the school authorities and has long been followed by most teachers, it may as well be altered if it no longer reflects the need of students. Besides, evaluation and criticism are themselves effective forms of communication, which should be welcomed by teachers because they will benefit a lot when their minds are open to the ideas and honest opinions of the youngster(年轻人,n). Those who feel ashamed to be criticized by their students or are afraid of losing their respect should adopt a more positive attitude instead of being excessively defensive and self-conscious

Of course, students' assessments of their teachers may not always be objective or make sense, given that they are still young and impulsive. But I believe their opinions deserve our attention if we are to have a more effective and productive education system.

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