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高分例文解析：
工作问题，是雅思考试的传统话题之一，在近年的雅思考试中出现的频率有所提高。这道作文题所涉及的求职方面的内容，是近年来工作类的话题中雅思考试中出现频率最高的一种。这篇范文非常值得参考，其中的词汇可以好好利用。
这个题目要求考鸭们给出“年轻人难以找到合适工作”的原因，并且给出相关建议，是典型的“原因+建议”类雅思作文题。这类文章的写作，最重要的是讲重点放在“原因”上而不是“建议”上。此片高分范文有别于传统的写作方法，将重点放在了“建议”上，可以说是另辟蹊径！首段话题引入；第二段给出了年轻人难以找到合适工作的原因；第三第四段从不同方面给出了相关建议；末尾段总结。
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题目
对于很多年轻人来说，选择一份合适的工作，是一个不小的问题。请说明造成这种现象的原因并且给出如何做出正确的决定的建议。
Choosing a suitable career is a problem that faces many young people. What are the reaso
ns? What suggestion would you give to them to help them make the right decision?
Each day, over a thousand job hunters swarm（涌往, v） into the South China Employment Service (SCES), one of the largest placement services in town, either to present themselves to potential employers or to have their resumes entered in the database of SCES. In Guangzhou alone, there are about ten large-scale employment services and still many smaller ones, all of which（介词前置，满满的套路有木有） are earning good money thanks to the growing number of job seekers（探索者, n） in recent years.
Things were quite different thirty years ago, when most people hold one job all the time. Today, however, it is much harder to find a suitable job. The booming（急速发展的，adj，告别fast developping!）economy has created stark(刻板的，adj) disparity（不一致的，n） in personal incomes, with some jobs considerably（相当地， adv）better paid than others. Hence(代替常规linkers，译为因此), people change their jobs more often, in the hope of becoming better off with their new employers. What is more, the fierce competitions between business firms also lead to the dismissal of incapable employees. They have no choice but seek another job. All these contribute to the increase in the number of job-hoppers.
Outlined（概述，vt） below are some of my suggestions to the young people who desire a successful career. To begin with, it is wise to remember that learning is a life-long process which is not limited to school education. Without constant learning, one may easily fall behind the times. Young people should understand that in addition to knowledge and skills, the ability to learn is also essential to their future development.
Besides, youngsters should get mentally（精神上, adv） prepared for the possible frustrations they may encounter while hunting for jobs. They may have to change a number of jobs before finding the most suitable one. While everybody is of some value to the society, it takes time for their value to be recognized by the community, or even by themselves. Provided that sustained effort is made, everybody will succeed in one profession or another.
Work is likely to become more demanding, and competition fiercer, but as long as we are fully prepared, the prospect（景色，前途， n） looks good for all of us.
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