【雅思考场速递】11月02日澳大利亚考题精讲

原创 2019年11月04日 环球雅思墨尔本分校


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A类Task 1   折线图

A类Task 2  2 Questions 类题目 - 社会类话题


Throughout the history, people dream to live in a perfect society where they have not agreed how the ideal society would be like. 


What is the most important element you think to make a perfect society? 

How do people do to achieve an idealsociety?







题目大意

有史以来,很多人都梦想着能够生活在一个完美的社会,可是完美社会是什么样子的大家还没有完全搞清楚。 

一个完美的社会需要具备哪些要素? 

人们应该如何做才能实现这样的理想社会?

写作思路

观点: 一个完美的社会需要政策的改变。


完美社会需要的要素:

1)责任= 社会对他的成员要负责

2)公平= 每一个成员都有同等的获取信息、资源和机会的权利


要实现这样的社会需要一些改变

1)获取信息的权利

2)资源公平分配

3)提供平等的机会


7 分例文


For thousands of years, we, human beings,have been dreaming of a perfect society or so-called ‘Utopia’ coined by Thomas More. Since every person has his or her own definition of the society, rather than a single, universal standard, there are at least as many definitions as there are people.

 

While a perfect society means so many different things to different people, I believe following mentioned elements play a vital role in achieving it. To begin with, most people probably concur that a good society usually benefits from responsible. It must be responsive to the people who live in that society, and be a society truly of the people, by the people, and for the people. Further, most people probably agree that fairness is another main contributor to a good society where everyone would at a minimum have equal access to information, resources, and opportunities. 

 

It is undeniable that the society described above is quite different from our current society, thus to get from here to there will require many intermediary steps. Firstly, the public are granted the equal right to access to information. For one thing, laws should be rewrite in an easy- to -understand way. For another, most of public related data from governments are required to be easily accessed by their people via the Internet. Secondly, resources need to be allocated to everyone equally. The federal government should build enough good housing for everyone to have a decent place to live rather than sleeping on the street. The last but not the least, the government is encouraged to make great efforts to provide a job for everyone who can work and to ensure equal educational opportunity, for example, good schools for everyone from preschool to adult education.


In conclusion, I think that to begin the shift toward an ideal society would depend on specific policy changes in the fields of information, employment and education. 


相关单词


Utopia 乌托邦

concur 承认

decent 体面的

shift 转变




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