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自二月以来，PTE官方悄悄地对一直题目“最稳定“的大作文部分进行了加题，换题。这些题目对于2017至2018年参加考试的同学来说可能并不是很陌生。
没错！！
培生把之前已经淘汰的老题，又拿出来考新一代的PTEers了。
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考虑到大家在平时PTE备考的过程中，因为备考时间较为紧张等原因，大部分的同学不会将复习的重心放在大作文上，更不可能积极的搜集题目素材，不断完善修改自己的文章。
7PLUS柒加教育会在最近的和大家陆续分享一下新题目的思路观点，并给大家提供相应的范文。
希望能够帮助大家在考场上顺利答题，早日和PTE分手快乐。
解析
题目：
Some people say that people are defined by the place where they grow up, but some argue that environment only has little effect. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use a celebrity you know to support your opinion.
解析：
首先在分析这道题目的时候，同学们一定要注意，题目问的是什么？也就是题目让我们讨论的是什么问题。
通过读题，我们会发现：这篇作文题目给我们了两个相反的观点观点，第一个是: people are defined by the place where they grow up，也就: 个人的未来是由成长的地方决定的。而第二个观点是截然不同的，即： The environment only has little effect, 也就是说：环境对个人的发展几乎没有什么影响。
接下来，我们需要看一下这道题目的问法。从题目中可以看出，这个题目是一个“Agree or Disagree" 类型的题目。所以在写作过程中，大家可以两个中心段都同意第一个观点，也可以都同意第二个观点，当然，两段分别同意一个观点也是完全可以的。
最后在回答这个题目的时候，大家一定要注意，这篇文章在举例说明的过程中，一定一定要用名人的例子。
这里，7PLUS柒加教育的老师们给大家提供了一些观点，希望能够帮助大家拓展一下思维。
Environmental Effects 环境影响
Receive a better education 接受良好的教育
Commmunicate and interact with high-educated individuals
Expand people's horizons
Lay a solid foundation for future career development
Enjoy more opportunities 享受更好机遇
More chances to participate in social activies
More chances to take internship in big companies
More likely to get in touch with professionals in different areas
名人代表：
Bill Gates - from upper class family
Mark Zuckerberg - comes from a rich Jewish family - studied programming at early age and was taught by David Newman.
Hardworking 后天努力
Unremitting effort不懈的努力
Was born and grew in a poverty family 出身于贫困家庭
From disadvantaged background 来自贫困家庭
名人代表：
LeBron James－most excellent basketball players － was born and grew up in a poverty family － unremitting efforts
各段写法及参考范文
第一段：
首先，在第一段中，大家可以简单的paraghrase题目给的这两种观点，或做一个背景介绍，然后引出自己的观点，第一段就可以结束，
在练习和考试过程中，切勿花太多的时间在开头段落的写作中。
第一段建议大家5分钟之内一定要写完。例如：
第一句，背景介绍
Anything to do with children’s development is of the nearly universal interest
第二句写法：复述题目
Nowadays, people hold divergent views about what contribute to a successful person. Some believe that the place where a person grows up plays a predominant role in his future achievement.
第二句，自己观点
In my opinion, apart from the birthplace, hardworking is another thing that can lead to a future success.
第二段：
Essay第二段在运用连接词或连接短语进行过渡后，就可以直接开始说自己的第一个观点了，切勿进行不必要的铺垫。英文写作采取总分结构，所以论点句需要放在段落的开头。
同时，在论述的过程中，论据需要一环套一环，保证自己的逻辑清晰。因为PTE采取机器打分，机器对逻辑关系的判定可能更为精准。
第二段写法例如：
第一句：连接词＋第一个观点
Admittedly, good environment lays a solid foundation for young children’s future development.
第二，三，四句：举例解释说明你的观点
Making school environment as an example, students who live in metropolis always receive advantageous education materials.
Compared with their colleagues in rural areas, they enjoy advanced teaching materials and have more chances to take part in social activities and sports to enrich horizons and improve overall skills.
As a result, because of these merits, it will be easier for them to enter top universities and finally become well-known.
第五句：总结自己本段的观点
Thus, no one can doubt that it is their living environment that promotes their opportunities to accomplish their goals.
第三段
Essay第三段的写作套路与第二段相似，大家只需要讲述第二个观点。
下面是关于第二个观点的参考文段:
However, hardworking is also a pivotal component of one’s future success. For instance, LeBron James, one of the most excellent basketball players in the world, although he was born and grew up in a poverty family, he still uses his unremitting efforts to attain his success and finally becomes a role model of thousands of people. Through his experience, individuals, especially youngsters should understand that if you continuously work hard and spare no effort to get through all arduousness, wherever you grow up, you will eventually become the one you dream of.
第四段：
大作文的最后一段，不建议大家进行长篇大论。考场上时间有限，大家只需要把自己两个中心段落的观点进行总结即可。同时，有效的把宝贵的时间留下来用于拼写和语法的检查：
下面是结尾段落的范文：
In conclusion, living environment may have a positive effect on people’s future success, but hardworking is always the one that you need to have in order to achieve your goals.
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