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看了我们的预测 (输入预测然后输入w),同学们都知道本周我们预测写作小作文会考PIE和table,为了帮助大家,我们准备了范文帮大家复习和学习。


You should spend about 20 minutes onthis task.
The table below give information about Favorite Pastimes in differentcountries.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, andmake comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words



From 30 - 50 years old


TV

Sport

Reading

Hobbies

Music

Beach

Sleep

Canada

60

22

15

40

3

0

2

France

/

/

30

20

4

/

/

England

/

/

30

21

4

/

20

Australia

65

30

15

45

5

30

4

Korea

22

21

60

45

2

2

4

China

15

25

60

50

0

5

5

USA

60

23

15

42

23

30

2

Japan

/

/

62

/

/

/

/


This table clearly presents and comparesfavorable pastimes in eight different countries. The pastimes, across the topof the table, are analyzed in relation to each country.


As can be seen, about 60% of Canadians, Australians and Americans like watchingtelevision. On the other hand, this figure is quite low for China where only15% of people watch television. Predictably, Americans like music at 23%,whereas only 2 to 5% of people in the other countries feel the same way. 20% ofpeople in England enjoy sleeping as a pastime whereas in Canada andthe USA, for example, the figure is only 2%. Interestingly, the Chineselike hobbies the most at 50%, as opposed to only 20% in France. It isn'tsurprising that the highest percentage of beach-lovers is in Australia and theUSA at 30%.


It seems that pastimes of people of different nationalities may be influencedby a number of factors such as the socio-economic situation or the climate.These factors influence cultural differences between different nationalitiesand make cross-cultural experiences more interesting.

(175 words)


这篇文章首先从结构上是很清晰的三段式 第一段首先改写题目并概括 第二段很清晰的介绍一些数据并描述数据间关系,并采用先描述数据 后做数据间关系分析的顺序 很有逻辑和条理

第三段作总结并做合理预测 这样的结构是我们要学习的
同时在第二段主体段中句式用词表达很丰富 值得我们借鉴




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