【精讲PTE大作文】年轻人要不要早结婚?

2020年04月24日 7PLUS英语



自二月以来,PTE官方悄悄地对一直题目“最稳定“的大作文部分进行了加题,换题。这些题目对于2017至2018年参加考试的同学来说可能并不是很陌生。


没错!!

培生把之前已经淘汰的老题,又拿出来考新一代的PTEers了

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考虑到大家在平时PTE备考的过程中,因为备考时间较为紧张等原因,大部分的同学不会将复习的重心放在大作文上,更不可能积极的搜集题目素材,不断完善修改自己的文章。


7PLUS柒加教育会在最近的和大家陆续分享一下新题目的思路观点,并给大家提供相应的范文


希望能够帮助大家在考场上顺利答题,早日和PTE分手快乐。


今天,我们来一起分析一道有趣的题目:“要不要早结婚“

题目:

It is usually foolish to get married before completing your studies and getting established in a good job? Do you agree or disagree?

解析:

首先在分析这道题目的时候,同学们一定要注意,题目问的是什么?也就是题目让我们讨论的是什么问题


通过读题,我们会发现:这是一篇典型的“Agree or Disagree"的题目。


对于这种类型的题目,同学们在考场上对于观点,立场的选择是比较灵活的。


也就是说,大家可以选择”一边倒“的写法,也可以选择两个观点各写一段


很多同学可能会疑惑,那么这个题目我需要写点什么呢?



这里,7PLUS柒加教育的老师们给大家提供了一些观点,希望能够帮助大家拓展一下思维。


支持-不同意早结婚

  1. Financial pressure

    相关短语:

    - Increase expenditure in different areas of life

    - Do not have sufficient income to support themselves

    - Rely on parents 

    - High financial pressure results in quarrels or even divorce

    - Lack of income

  2. Cannot concentrate on studies

    相关短语

    -cannot balance study and family life

    -Limted time and energy

    -Have difficulty in finding a good job after graduate

    - Poor academic performance


反对的原因-同意早结婚

  1. Responsibility

    相关短语

    - Learn to take responsibility from family life

    - Develop a sense of responsibility

    - A valuable quality for success in both academic and future career development

    - Become a reliable people

  2. Support and Encourage each other

    -Relieve study pressure

    -A person who is willing to help you solve the problems in study

    -Encourage each other to pursue higher achievement


第一段


在第一段中,大家可以简单的paraghrase题目给的这两种观点,或做一个背景介绍,然后引出自己的观点,第一段就可以结束,


在练习和考试过程中,切勿花太多的时间在开头段落的写作中


背景介绍,复述题目

Early marriage has become a ubiquitous issue for debate. An increasing number of university students choose to get married before graduate. People hold divergent views about this issue.

 

自己的观点

In my opinion, I believe that it is not a wise choice to get married early.




第二段



Essay第二段在运用连接词或连接短语进行过渡后,就可以直接开始说自己的第一个观点了,切勿进行不必要的铺垫。英文写作采取总分结构,所以论点句需要放在段落的开头。


同时,在论述的过程中,论据需要一环套一环,保证自己的逻辑清晰。因为PTE采取机器打分,机器对逻辑关系的判定可能更为精准。

第二段写法例如:


第一句:连接词+第一个观点

Admittedly, getting married before finishing college has a positive effect on improving one’s responsibility.  


第二,三,四,五句:举例解释说明你的观点

For example, one of my friends married his wife during university. 


After that, it was obvious that he studied harder than before and tried to find part-time job which offered a higher income. 


He said that compared with past time, he was obliged to support his family and create a superior living condition for his wife, so he needed to spare no effort do everything. 


Due to his hard working, he became more outstanding and finally got an excellent job. 


第五句:总结自己本段的观点

Based on his case, we cannot deny that early marriage works well in enhancing people's responsibility.




第三段


Essay第三段的写作套路与第二段相似,大家只需要讲述第二个观点。


下面是关于第二个观点的参考文段:


However, not everyone has the same experience like his. Having a early marriage may make young people find it impossible to balance their study and personal life. More specifically, since a person's energy and time are limited, after getting married, most people tend to allocate more time in their family life, making the time spent on study reduce significantly. For example, a wife may not able to fully concentrate on reviewing her subjects after finishing all the chores. As a result, the academic achievement of those young adults cannot be guaranteed. Thus, no one can doubt that early marriage should not be encouraged among young people.




结尾段


大作文的最后一段,不建议大家进行长篇大论。考场上时间有限,大家只需要把自己两个中心段落的观点进行总结即可。同时,有效的把宝贵的时间留下来用于拼写和语法的检查


In conclusion, although getting married before finishing education adds responsibility to self-controlled people, it is still not a good choice for most individuals.


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