Some people believe living in a big city is bad for their health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The increasing number of people moving to the city has forced us to consider the widespread ramifications of such practice, particularly on our health. Living in the city negatively impacts your health not only because air quality is significantly lower in larger cities, but it is also harder to get enough exercise.
这是一个较简单的题目，没有什么很tricky的关键词陷阱。只要好好的注意big city和health，fully address the topic不是难题。
Large cities often are quite polluted and as a result, this can negatively affect your well-being. As central business districts often have a high concentration of people, the traffic is also quite dense, which results in the accumulation of large amounts of car exhaust. This isdetrimental to air quality and as people have to breathe this polluted air their health consequently suffers.
住在big city里对健康有害是因为polluted air. 类似于accumulation—集聚、high concentration of people—人口密集、detrimental都是可以借鉴的社会类和政府类的词句。
Health levels also tend to decline in the city because it is generally harder to exercise. Many people living outside the city often go to parks or use the suburban streets to jog and exercise, however, this is infeasible in the city as there are fewer parks available and side-walks are too crowded to jog on. As it is more inconvenient to exercise in the city, many people forgo this necessity and their fitness level decline which leads to a decline in health.
big cities的人明显少了很多锻炼的机会，而这也正是使健康变差的原因之一。作者不经意间用jog这个例子来例证整段的观点，虽然并没有for example之类的连接词，但是整段的逻辑很清晰，coherence and cohesion得分较高。
Although many people have begun to move to the big cities for various reasons, we mustbe wary of the accompanying largely negative effects on health and well-being. Unless steps are taken to mitigate these effects, living in the city will be largely detrimental to our health.
各位烤鸭们在学习范文词句的同时，也可以借鉴一下每篇例文里的idea。这样就不用担心会遇到一些较为“偏僻”的话题时，想不出idea了哦！~
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