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2022.3.19真题
Farmlands and parks in many cities have been replaced with houses. Is it positive or negative development?
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2022.3.19真题
Farmlands and parks in many cities have been replaced with houses. Is it positive or negative development?
满分词汇:
garden city n. 花园城市
degraded adj. 更差的
populate v. 充斥着
affordability n. 可购买度
by record levels 以破纪录的方式
sprawling city 延伸的城市
viable solution 可行的方案
exacerbate v. 恶化
支持段:
Unlike garden cities, in which concrete high-rises and log-jammed roads have been replaced with energy-efficient buildings, green spaces and car-free zones, cities with intensive residential buildings normally means degraded living environment. Compared with householders living in greener urban environments, those living in high density residential areas are likely to have higher levels of mental distress and lower levels of wellbeing. Besides human beings, urban areas are also populated with various other species, and replacing agricultural and park areas with housing means loss of their habitats and bio-diversity.
反对段:
However, higher density residential zones can increase housing affordability by utilizing all developable land to its greatest extent. Considering that in the past decades housing prices have risen by record levels in major cities in the globe, a sprawling city at the cost of farmland and parks seems to be the only viable solution for the exacerbated housing crisis.
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