无忧雅思【内部资料】作文结尾段精讲 -- 小雅哥顶雷奉献 ^(oo)^

2014年08月13日 无忧小雅哥


雅思写作的introduction写得很漂亮,那必然也要有一个精彩的结尾。虽然雅思作文的分数并不是取决于结尾段落,但是一个漂亮而干脆的结尾段还是会对TR的分数产生影响,花2分钟学习下尽可能的把大作文的分数拉高。


方法一: 回答问题 Answer the question

例题: when a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?


结尾:In conclusion, without suggesting that all technology is necessarily good, I think it is by no means “pointless”, in any way, to try to keep traditions alive with technology. We should not ignore technology, because it can be our friend and support our way of life.


这个结尾段明确提出了自己的观点,不是所有的俄科技都是好的,但是科技也不是完全没有用处的。


注意:不要添加新的信息,结尾段只要总结文章中的观点并且回答题目中的问题即可。



方法二: 2-3个句子为宜 2-3 sentences are enough

例题: Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational; otherwise it’s waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?


结尾: Finally, I think it is also important to remember that children need to relax as well as work. If everything they do must have some educational or academic relevance, then they will soon get tired of studying altogether, which is the last thing parents would want.


2句话,作文的态度很明确。学生不可能花所有的时间去学习,否则就会完全失去对学习的兴趣,所以也应该给学生一些放松的时间。


一般在结尾段,考生就应该给考官一个明确的信号词,让考官了解到文章已经进入尾声了。


这里所谓的信号词大致可以概括为:

Finally, To sum up, In conclusion, In brief, In a nutshell


信号句型:

It can be concluded that…

We can find that…

I think it is also important to remember that…

The main point is to make sure that…

I believe that

Personally, I think that…

I would say that…

My view is …




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