各位学霸们好,有学生跟黄老师反应说昨天的PTE写作题目很难,今天黄老师就来跟大家带来这道大作文的解析,题目如下:(收录于《雅培PTE满分答案-1月版》,需要的同学们请找黄老师免费领取哦!)
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students learning plays centuries ago?
这道题看似简单,其实暗藏玄机,该题有两组核心词,分别是:high school students和 plays centuries ago。很多同学在写这篇文章时,只点到了plays centuries ago,而并没有点到高中生,那么这样就会被扣掉逻辑分(written discourse)。比如:
古代戏剧能够传播过去的文化。- 和高中生无关
古代戏剧能够提升文学能力。- 和高中生无关
所以,同学们必须注意的是,必须在每一个点中同时出现上述两组词,而且多次出现的同样词汇最好替换,以便于增加词汇分数。
所以,上述的点可以改成:
古代戏剧能够让高中生(注意替换)了解过去的文化。
古代戏剧能够提升高中生(注意替换)的文学能力。
这样,就是一个高逻辑分的点啦!
同样的,PTE大作文需要同学们写出好词和好的语法结构,语法结构可以通过模版来解决,但是好词就必须平时积累了,黄老师推荐同学们选择性的背诵一下黄老师提供的满分范文中的好词,这样下次在考试时碰到这些题目了以后就可以用出来啦!
那么,接下来我们来看这道题的满分答案吧
23. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students learning plays centuries ago?
* 该题涉及词汇较难,黄老师推荐同学们仔细背诵下列词汇
论点1:The dazzling thought-world of the classic plays, which used to be restricted to the privileged few, give teenagers ideas of civilization and happiness.
展开1:The participant will have the chance to meet the giants of human civilization through dialogue accompanied by a presentation of theatrical plays along with the importance of the Greek tragedy, a form of writing that had the ability to stare at the abyss of the human soul.
论点2:Great ancient literature has the power to give adolescents meaningful interpretations of our current reality, nurturing their various abilities.
展开2:Classics is a wide-ranging discipline, which incorporates elements of history, archaeology, art, religion, mythology, philosophy, gender and queer studies, and numerous other disciplines. These classes enable adolescents to develop greater life skills such as perspective, cultural understanding and creativity.
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