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随着PTE考试评分系统越来越复杂，扩充的题目越来越多，许多同学开始意识到考试的整体难度在不断地提高。即使在大作文这种曾经被认为是PTE相比较雅思而言最简单的部分，同学们也遇到了这样或那样的问题。今天我们来给大家特别的分析和讲解一下大作文的评分标准，以帮助大家了解具体的评分标准，有针对的进行日常的练习及复习。

首先，我们先看一下官方评分标准里大作文部分的评分细节：

	Point	Requirement
Content	3	Adequately deals with the prompt	充分处理，讨论题目信息
Form	2	Length is between 200 and 300 words	字数在200-300词
Development, structure and coherence	2	Shows good development and logical structure	显示出良好的发展和逻辑结构
Grammar	2	Shows consistent grammatical control of complex language. Errors are rare and difficult to spot	显示复杂语言，语法的良好运用。很少出现语法错误
General linguistic range	2	Exhibits smooth mastery of a wide range of language to formulate thoughts precisely, give emphasis, differentiate and eliminate ambiguity. No sign that the test taker is restricted in what they want to communicate	展现出对语言的流畅掌握，精确地表达，强调自己思想和观点，不会产生歧义。
Vocabulary range	2	Good command of a broad lexical repertoire, idiomatic expressions and colloquialisms	熟练掌握广泛的词汇，习语
Spelling	2	Correct spelling	正确的拼写

从上面的表格中，我们可以看到，PTE的大作文是从上面六个方面评分的。于此同时我们同样需要注意上面罗列的六个评分方向其实是与我们成绩单上面的写作小分密切相关的，具体的情况我们可以看一下下面这幅图片。

从这幅图片中我们可以看出，六个评分标准被划分到四个不同的写作小项中。而在官方开始为我们打大作文的分数前，我们必须做到两个点：

· 内容分不能为0

· 格式分不能为0

虽然在真实考试中很少有同学会出现这两个分数为0的情况，但是我们依然要知道什么情况下，这两个分数会被判定为零分

· 在官方的score guide中，内容分为0被定义为”0 Does not deal properly with the prompt “，这意味着当你的作文完全跑题时，即你的答案与题目中提出的问题无法有效的对应时，即使你的答案复合格式，语法，语言等各方面的要求，你的作文依然会被判定为零分。例如如果写作的题目为：

Some universities deduct students’ work if assignment is given late. What is your opinion and suggest some alternative actions?

而你在作文中谈论学生晚交作业的弊端。那么你的作文很可能就会被判定为跑题。

因此，同学们一定要认真审题，避免减少此类错误！！！

· 其次，官方对格式分0分的定义为“Length is less than 120 or more than 380 words. Essay is written in capital letters, contains no punctuation or only consists of bullet points or very short sentences “，即字数少于120或多于380，全篇使用大写字母，没有标点符号，或全部为罗列的要点。这个评分点，我相信，如果大家稍微注意，都是不会出现的。

说完这两项后，我们下面用一片同学的作文来看一下其他的评分项

题目

The world’s governments and organizations are facing a lot of issues. Which do you think is the most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet and give the solution?

答案

As the world integrates, the proliferation of issues that world's government and organization are facing has become a prevalent topic for fierce debate. Yet at the same time, various issues have risen, a serious one of which is what is (在这里这位同学想要表达的是“什么是最pressing的问题，但是如果不加what is，这句话所要表达的意思就变成了“最pressing的问题”而在前文中，他没有提到任何问题。因此这里这个小错误就会让他的linguistic range的小分受一些影响) most pressing problem for the inhabitants on our planet. In my opinion, I believe that global warming is the most destructive problem, and some solutions can be provided（这里建议是被提供的，所以需要使用动词的过去分词。因此他这里的错误会导致语法分被扣） to tackle this issue.

First and foremost, there are（这里出现的一个问题就是对there be句型的过度使用，大家可以试着想一下，他这句话所要表达的意思是不是: plenty of species are extinct because of global warming. 因此，这里完全没有必要用there be句型。因此他的linguistic range会收到影响） plenty of species are extinct because of global warming. According to the Discovery, the world's sixty percent of plantations（这里正确的语序应该为sixty percent of world’s plantations,这位同学这里的写法明显被中式思维所影响，直接将中文想要表达的内容翻译成了英文。因此他的general linguistic range又将收到影响） are died out because of the global warming, and animals like polar bear is（这里句子的主语为animals，所以动词应该用原形，所以这里应该是are。因为这个错误，这位同学的grammar的分数会被影响） one of the victims that can be attribute（首先前面是be动词，这里的attribute应该使用过去分词。因为这个错误，这位同学的语法分将会降低。其次attribute这个词的含义是归因于，而that引导的从句的主语是victims，这里翻译过来句子的意思会不合适。这里可以换成sacrificed due to this problem。因为用词的不准确，这位同学的vocabulary分数会被影响） to this problem as well. Furthermore, the environmentalist Mike pointed out that after 2050, thirty percent of continents will vanished（这里will后面应该加动词原形，所以这里应该为vanish。因此他的语法会会被影响） because of global warming. As a result, global warming is the most dangerous problem that is extremely harmful to humanity and other species.

Additionally, some solutions can be provided to address this issue. The (first前面需要加定冠词the。因此这里他的语法分会受影响) First one is renewable energy. To be more specific, the traditional energy, such as coal and patrol, can be completely replaced by those eco-friendly energy（这里前面用了those，所以这里energy应该是复数energies。因为这个错误，他的语法分会受影响）, like solar power and wind power. Moreover, governments can introduce new policy to encourage environmental-friendly transport, such as subway, bicycle, and bus. Therefore, global warming could be relieve（这里be动词后面应该加动词过去分词，所以应该为relieved。因此，他的语法分会被影响） by such methods.

In conclusion, having considered all the arguments above, I am firmly convinced that global warming is the most pressing problem. In order to address this issue, the government and our society should make a concerted effort, such as using renewable energy, and public transportation."

读完这个同学的作文，我们可以看到：

1. Written Disclosure：从文中我们可以看出来，这位同学对模版的使用还是很熟练的。所以在Development, structure and coherence是没有什么大的失误的，但是我们发现，他的General linguistic range出现了一些小的失误。因此他的这项小分考试时候大约会在70-80分左右。