2019年6月29日亚太区写作考情分析
2019年06月29日的考试已经落下帷幕。雅思姐在这里和大家简要分享一下这场考试的写作题目。
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大作文题目
Some people think sending criminals to prison is not an effective way to deal with them. Education and job training are better ways to help them. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
文章结构：双边论述类
关键词：criminals, education, job training
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审题
题目大意为：
把罪犯关进监狱并不是处罚他们最好的方式，反而，教育和职业训练能更好的帮助他们，对于这个观点你怎么看？
这个题目的观点包含两个部分，在写的时候一定都要有所回应。但是要注意后半个观点，不论是education还是job traning, 都一定要围绕criminals来分析，不能针对普通人或者学生，要格外注意跑题。
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It is a common issue to cope with criminals in society and how to redesign the existing prison system is argued by several groups of people. Some people suggest that we may provide training and work for them to adjust their behaviour and I partially agree with it.
复述题目观点并表明自己的观点
First of all, it is a positive method to encourage criminals and train them to live in normal life. Prisoners should receive education of vocational training learn personal skills and specific job skills because a criminal record makes finding a job more difficult. And education aims to make them better citizens, so they are less likely to re-offend. Second, society may take advantage of the period of training and studying which may result in reducing the rate of crime committing. Education is the root cause of such problems and that will be a wonderful chance to deal with it.
第二段阐述教育及训练的好处
观点1：教育能够让他们重新过正常人的生活，因为犯罪记录会给他们的生活。
观点2：教育及训练的过程也能够相应的减少犯罪率。因为缺乏教育和知识最根本的问题。
However, it is necessary to put law violators in prisons for social security. Punishing law breakers by incarceration can produce a deterring effect which forces people to give a second thought to committing a crime. This in turn could restrict the urge of anyone to offend and hence lower the crime rates. In addition, by confining those who are serial killers or frequent offenders in a cage, they could be prevented from harming other individuals and causing more problems to the society. Therefore, it is reasonable for us to claim that imprisonment is an effective way to deal with criminals.
第三段阐述反对观点：
观点1：为了社会安全，很有必要把犯法的人关进监狱，因为犯法的人出狱后很有可能二次犯法。
观点2：把犯罪的人关起来也能防止他们继续伤害其他人。
In conclusion, it is a controversial issue to consider a new and simple change of existing prison system. In my opinion, given the level crime of the system and apply to the scheme, it will be better and has positive and certain influence in both society and wrongdoers.
结尾全文，再次表明观点
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