17年首场雅思考试范文,你准备好开启学霸模式了吗?

2017年01月11日 无忧小雅哥


2017.01.07 

A Task 2 Sample Essay

【作为2017年的首场考试,题目到底好不好写呢?这其实是一道老题,关于Online courses,考题类别是positive or negative development. 这题并不难写,大部分学生在复习期间应该都接触这个话题的考题,所以希望大家都能发挥的不错哦!下面,我们就来看看无忧内部的高分范文,是怎么诠释的吧!】


Some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delivered on campus. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

With many opportunities that have been made possible by the Internet, universities these days now offer online courses as an alternative to studying on campus. I personally feel that this is definitely a positive development due to the convenience and flexibility. 


A major advantage of the availability of online courses is the convenience it allows many students. Whilst on-campus study would require students to commute to campus locations – sometimes long distances – to complete their degrees, online courses allows students living in rural areas and even other countries to complete their studies online no matter where they are. For instance, Swinburne Online is an online university that allows its students to watch lectures, interact with tutors and even sit for exams online without having to travel long distances unlike on-campus students. This convenience is a huge advantages for online university students. 


Another positive point of online universities as compared to traditional university studies is the flexibility and freedom to study these courses at any time. Online lectures and content tend to be pre-recorded unlike live lectures on-campus, meaning online students are not limited to rigid schedules dictated by traditional universities. For example, videos and lectures on online courses are pre-recorded, allowing students the flexibility to access these resources at any time just by logging in online. Thus, this benefit of schedule flexibility is one that students have compared courses delivered on campus. 


In conclusion, from the points mentioned above, I believe strongly that online courses offer great positive developments because of their convenience and flexibility for online students. 


Word Count: 257


这篇文章的字数为257, 非常适中!雅思Task 2的字数要求为250字,字数一般控制在260-270 左右为佳。不能少于250字,但也不要超过300字哦~

本篇范文中,并没有过多的使用一些“炫技”类型的大词难词,反而是用非常通俗易懂的语言,把作者想要表达的观点解释的很清楚。雅思作文不光在乎词汇句法,更看重的是审题以及逻辑哦!所以大家在努力提升词句能力的同时,也要注意学习如何正确的写好雅思作文~

 


【key Vocabulary学习时间】


Alternative: 供选择的,共替代的选择

Availability: 可用性,实用性

Commute: 通勤

No matter where: 无论哪里

Interact with: 与…相互作用,在文中是与tutor打交道的意思~

Sit for exams: sit for坐着,参加;这个短语可以算一个固定搭配,参加考试

Unlike: 和…不同,不同的

Rigid: 严格的,死板的

Dictate: 命令,指示

Log in: 登陆


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