本周PTE大作文真题范文&WE高分秘诀,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师给大家带来本周考场出现的PTE大作文真题范文和解析。

注意事项

目前PTE大作文Write Essay机经命中率比较稳定，大作文苦手还是可以通过背诵机经好词&思路，再加上套正确的模版的方式来拿到该部分高分。但是，同学们在备考该题型时需要注意以下两点：

1. 好词积累

大作文是整个PTE考试中唯一一道需要同学们使用好词/替换词的题目，而且这些词需要与题目的话题有一定的关联性，换句话来说就是：在模版中放一大堆和题目没有关联的词汇是不会提升词汇分数的。所以这部分词汇需要在范文中背诵，（需要完整版《雅培PTE满分答案》的同学们可以找黄老师免费领取哦！）

2. 模版选择

黄老师发现市面上很多模版字数非常多，最夸张的模版本身就有150个字左右。套这样的模版容易造成写作卡分的情况，因为在电脑识别同学们答案的时候，200字的文章有150字（80%）都是与话题无关的废话词汇，而真正电脑能够理解的，与话题有关的有用词汇只有20%，分数可想而知不会高了。所以同学们切记不要套大量废话的模版。

什么是正确的模版？

正确的模版应该起到下面两个作用：

- 给文章一个正确的逻辑框架【分段+衔接词】

- 把考生写的简单句组合成复杂句

没错，在真正的高分模版中，同学们还是需要自己写简单句的，（黄老师强烈不推荐同学们套任何只需要填词的模版！！！），而模版的作用就是把这些简单句组合成复杂句，比如：

展开句模版：Compared with (同类比较), (句子), which means (句子结果).

实战套用：Compared with petroleum vehicles, alternative fuel vehicles do not produce any greenhouse gas, which means they are sustainable for our environment.

同学们可以发现，这里大家写的句子：

alternative fuel vehicles do not produce any greenhouse gas they are sustainable for our environment 都为简单句，但是可以通过模版把他们拼接成一个高分复杂句，而这才是一个真正好的PTE大作文模版的功效。

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请同学们牢记黄老师上面提到的要点，接下来我们来看PTE大作文范文吧！

25. Do you think the place he or she grow up can determine the achievement of the person. List a celebrity who becomes famous because of the place he or she grew up.

* 该题名人随便编即可，但是一定要解释清楚该名人是干嘛的，要不然电脑可能无法识别

论点1：Individual development can vary because of different learning opportunities and the environment in which learning takes place, which are all significantly connected to one’s birth place.

展开1：For instance, Kobe Bryant, who is one of the most renowned basketball players, grew up in a wealthy family in which his father is a well-established basketball player who earned a fortune in his career. Because of his birth family, Kobe can have opportunities which his counterparts dare not dream, including being coached by other hall-of-fame basketball players and participation in various professional basketball camps, all of which had led to his ultimate success in his career.

论点2：The place one grew up also shapes the mindset of the person, which in turn largely affect his or her future achievement.

展开2：Differences in unique environmental experiences during childhood could lead to disparities in motivation to practice, and in the type of personality formed, as well as in how and when exceptional psychological abilities are developed. Positive experiences with parents, or encouragement from siblings or friends can all attribute to a positive mindset of a person, which assists him or her in conquering various conundrums in his future career and in achieving his or her career goals.

秒懂逻辑：更多儿时专业训练机遇 + 更好的性格成长。

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28. With the increase of digital media available online, the role of the library has become obsolete. University should only procure digital materials rather than textbooks. Do you agree or disagree?

* 注意该题的问题到底是好处和坏处（两边都的写）还是同不同意（可以写一边）

论点1: Lecture notes or academic papers stored in electronic devices are relatively more portable compared with paper-based materials.

展开1: compared with reference materials required to be skimmed by university assignments, which are sheer in volume if contained in physical books, such materials can be accessed by university students without physical boundary because the information require virtually no physical space in mobile devices or laptops.

论点2: All the readings in tertiary education can have round-the-clock accessibility and availability if they are provided in online library rather than physical books.

展开2: although paper-based journals can be shared among college students, digitalization of such journals can guarantee 24/7 access by multiple clienteles.

秒懂逻辑：便于携带+共享方便（同意不同意问题：一边倒）

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32. It is getting harder for children to live and grow in the 21st century than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

* 该题的21世纪为一个重要核心词，在文章中间段千万不要遗漏。

论点1: In this century, an increasing number of children are reported to be obese, which is significantly greater than that in previous century, and is strongly associated with recent technologies.

展开1: Nowadays, children who spend more time inside on their phones or tablets fail to spend as much time engaging outdoor activities, which establishes the habit of technology use that doesn’t involve exercise.

论点2: With all the constant immersion in online communication, there are some real concerns about how it impacts childhood development negatively in recent years.

展开2: With more time spent online, young children in this century are having issues with face-to-face social interactions because many seem to prefer to text or talk on social media as opposed to talking to each other in-person. Even when children spend time together, they may spend more time texting or on their phones than actually being together.

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34. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of being over-competitive to individuals (and society)?

* 该题不确定考试是否一定会有社会影响，如果有的话同学们也必须写出社会的影响

论点1: Ambition can transfer to a strong desire to do or to achieve something beyond the everyday tasks of life, which is a great virtue nowadays.

展开1: People who are highly competitive typically persevere until they reach their desired goals, they will not give up easily and study the best of the best in any specified area they are striving to be competitive in so they can also be the top-notch in their field.

论点2: Being competitive also has its disadvantages such as people being labeled as (conceited, self-absorbed, too picky, full of themselves and not being flexible and sometimes passive-aggressive 可以任选几个).

展开2: There also can be a positive correlation with anxiety disorder as highly competitive natures tend to stress some people out if they fail to win, as these persons generally do not know how to channel their losses and use it as a learning lesson instead of a defeat.