自二月以来,PTE官方悄悄地对一直题目“最稳定“的大作文部分进行了加题,换题。这些题目对于2017至2018年参加考试的同学来说可能并不是很陌生。
没错!!
培生把之前已经淘汰的老题,又拿出来考新一代的PTEers了。
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考虑到大家在平时PTE备考的过程中,因为备考时间较为紧张等原因,大部分的同学不会将复习的重心放在大作文上,更不可能积极的搜集题目素材,不断完善修改自己的文章。
7PLUS柒加教育会在最近的和大家陆续分享一下新题目的思路观点,并给大家提供相应的范文。
希望能够帮助大家在考场上顺利答题,早日和PTE分手快乐。
解析
题目:
Many people like dangerous activities, such as sky diving, extreme skiing, jumping and water-rafting. Are you in favor of it?
解析:
首先在分析这道题目的时候,同学们一定要注意,题目问的是什么?也就是题目让我们讨论的是什么问题。
通过读题,我们会发现:这篇作文题目是一个比较开放的题目,题干中只是向我们展示了一个近些年的一个流行趋势, 即:很多人热衷于极限运动,问你的观点是什么。
很多同学可能会疑惑,那么这个题目我需要写点什么呢?
答案其实很简单
你可以选择写 “支持人们参与极限运动,及对应的原因”
同样,你也可以讨论,为什么人们不要去参加极限运动,以及不参加的原因。
从两个中心段落的写法上来说,大家可以选择两段都支持,也可以两个段落都表示反对。当然一段支持,一段反对的写法也是没有问题的。
不管你选择怎样的写法,开头段的观点和结尾段落的结论是一致的就可以了。
这里,7PLUS柒加教育的老师们给大家提供了一些观点,希望能够帮助大家拓展一下思维。
支持的原因
Relieve work and life pressure 缓解工作及生活压力
相关短语:
- Hectic working lives 忙碌的工作生活
- Suffer from pressure from both work and life
- Feel relaxed
- Tension-eliminator 压力释放工具
- Mental health 心理健康
Health Benefits
相关短语:
-Burn calories 燃烧卡路里
-Heathly lifestyle 健康的生活方式
-Blood circulation 血液循环
- Strength bones 强健骨骼
Personal Achievement 个人成就
相关短语
-A sense of accomplishment 一种成就感
反对的原因
Safety 安全
相关短语
- High risk 高风险
-injuries 受伤
-Unpredicable circumstances, including storm
- Require to have professional training
各段写法及参考范文
第一段:
首先,在第一段中,大家可以简单的paraghrase题目给的这两种观点,或做一个背景介绍,然后引出自己的观点,第一段就可以结束,
在练习和考试过程中,切勿花太多的时间在开头段落的写作中。
第一段建议大家5分钟之内一定要写完。例如:
第一句,背景介绍
Over the past decade, extreme sports, ranging from skydiving to bungee-jumping, have become proliferated.
第二句写法:复述题目
People enjoy the excitement provided by these high-risk pursuits, while others argue that these sports are so dangerous that should be banned.
第三句,自己观点
In my opinion, although extreme sports offer us endless happiness, we still need to choose them carefully before we participate in them.
第二段:
Essay第二段在运用连接词或连接短语进行过渡后,就可以直接开始说自己的第一个观点了,切勿进行不必要的铺垫。英文写作采取总分结构,所以论点句需要放在段落的开头。
同时,在论述的过程中,论据需要一环套一环,保证自己的逻辑清晰。因为PTE采取机器打分,机器对逻辑关系的判定可能更为精准。
第二段写法例如:
第一句:连接词+第一个观点
Admittedly, extreme sports serve as a stress-relieved and tension-eliminator in our everyday hectic working lives.
第二,三,四句:举例解释说明你的观点
Setting my colleague, a climber, as an example. she chooses a challenging mountain to climb each year.
She told me, when she climbs a mountain, she feels she is combing with the nature and has a sense of accomplishment when she stands on the summit of the mountain.
During the period, she no longer needs to consider anything about her work, and can totally release all pressure.
第五句:总结自己本段的观点
From her experience, it is obvious that extreme sports play a predominate role in relieving pressure.
第三段
Essay第三段的写作套路与第二段相似,大家只需要讲述第二个观点。
下面是关于第二个观点的参考文段:
However, it is no doubt that not everyone is suitable for doing these exercises. It is reported that every years, millions of people injured or lost life due to these sports. For instance, when they climb a mountain, an unpredictable storm may threaten their lives. The same thing also applies to marathon, which has a huge amount of participants. In a recent marathon in China, a person died due to sudden heart disease. Thus, we should realize that when things go wrong, we cannot pay a heavy price of injuring or losing our lives in these sports.
第四段:
大作文的最后一段,不建议大家进行长篇大论。考场上时间有限,大家只需要把自己两个中心段落的观点进行总结即可。同时,有效的把宝贵的时间留下来用于拼写和语法的检查:
下面是结尾段落的范文:
In conclusion, extreme sports present an opportunity for people to get rid of pressure in their daily routine, but individuals should also have a better understanding of their own health situation and abilities before taking part in them.