7分速成对象:
雅思写作基本稳定在6到6.5分的学生。
7分速成三部曲
Outline：
标准：了解雅思写作评分标准，尤其是6分与7分的标准区别。
这一部分是为了找到问题。
标准答案：这并不是我直接给你答案，而是一个互动的过程：上课听课做练习，下课做作业，做作业有feedback。
标准化：7分的标准答案是通过互动产生的，但雅思考试没有互动。让你的写作无论遇到什么题目都能hold得住7分就得靠标准化----无论写什么样的作文，都等于写同一篇7分水平的作文。
误区：标准化不等于套模板，套模板是山寨版的标准化。
举例：Example 2: Nowadays, with the development of economy/technology…①
标准化是将思路、逻辑、语法标准化，可以具体到句子和词语。标准化说到底就是控制。
标准化举例：
每当写到第二个观点展开部分的最后一句，你就会想到：此处应有虚拟语气：
If every primary school, the very first place where children receive education officially, could… ， we would be likely to
标准： 了解雅思写作7分标准
四大标准：
Task Achievement/ Response （唯一的标准区别，考察题目完成/回应的情况）
Coherence and cohesion （段落之间和段落内部的逻辑关系）
Lexical resources （词汇）
Grammatical range and accuracy （语法）
仔细看会发现，越低分之间标准的越明确，也就越客观，越高分之间的标准越模糊，也就越主观-----例子：TR的8分与9分的第一条，如果做阅读选T/F
但幸运的是，6分和7分之间的标准还是比较明显的。 标准并非是万能的，也有重点和非重点之分。 
Task Achievement/ Response
TA要求你选择客观信息和表达这些信息，强调的是信息处理的程度。不存在跑题情况。
TR要求你写主观观点，强调的是你的观点与题目紧扣的程度。简而言之，就是跑题有风险，审题需谨慎。
先看TA的6分和7分要求：address指的是根据题目作出回应；cover是涵盖了题目的要求，所以回应程度更好
再看TR，我们看Example 1 （针对TR 第一点）
题目有两句话，一个是观点，另一个是观点原因。如果写作重点都集中在观点，就容易出现6分的问题。
再看Example 2的②： TR的第二点； ③ 是针对TR第三点
值得注意的是，TR本身没有价值观判断，所以你观点本身不占分，TR可能出现的问题就是你的观点是否和题目紧扣，观点展开得好不好。
Coherence and cohesion
Coherence是段落结构，段与段之间的逻辑关系。这里可能出现的问题是会不会有逻辑地分段。一般来说，大家都知道雅思大作文要有三部分：开头段，主体段和结尾段。
Example 2 的主体段，三段其实都在说advantages，完全可以合成一段。
Cohesion 是段落内部的逻辑结构。传统来说，就是每个段落是否有主题，如何围绕主题展开讨论。句子之间衔接有没有问题。重点看CC第二点：宁愿少用或者拼命用也不要用错。Because和so连用，although和but连用。Account for 因果置换。
TR和CC代表你的思路和逻辑，而后两者就是代表你的遣词造句能力。
Lexical resources
重点在于：词汇本身与搭配
词汇本身很主观，如第二点：less-common vocabulary因人而异。重点是语境和搭配。
例子：disaster, catastrophe和Armageddon
搭配看④：on Earth
Grammatical range and accuracy
重点在于：语法的准确与多样
第一点：
看⑤
Example 1 （11.21最新考题）:
Some people argue that the parents of the children who break the law should be punished in some way, because they are responsible for their children’s action. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Example 2 (学生作业):
Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays with the rapid growth of human population, wild animals become less and less①. Since wild animals have no place in the present century, some people think that it is a waste of resources in regards of protecting them. As far as I am concerned, the advantages of protecting wild animals far outweigh the disadvantages②.
First of all, wild animals play an important part in the whole ecosystem. The rapid decrease of one species could break the balance of the food chain which⑤ could result in the extinction of other species, like trees and grasses. Protecting wild animals is also helpful in protecting the other species, which could make a sustainable contribution to the whole species in the earth④.
Secondly, wild animals’ protection also plays an indispensable part in the overall development of human beings. Wild animals’ protection also means environmental protection which⑤ could help to improve living qualities and pass on a good surrounding to the next generation. It lays a very solid foundation for future sustainable development and human civilization.
Thirdly, protecting wild animals could promote the employment and reduce unemployment rate which⑤ could reduce conflict of people. The increase of some emerging industries could release the financial pressure of the government, solve the employment issue and even promote the economy of the whole country③.
In summary, protecting wild animals has many advantages and it could produce a series of benefits for the ecosystem, human beings and the whole society②. As a result, wild animals’ protection should made no efforts in order to make a sustainable development of human beings.
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