【雅思写作】两个小结构，轻松写出7分复杂结果句,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

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各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一个雅思写作中常见的句型写法 - 双结果句型。

双结果句型

很多时候我们在写雅思作文时会写到’结果的结果’这类表达，比如：

政府需要鼓励人们乘坐公交，这样能够减少私家车的数量，从而降低尾气排放。

在这类表达结构中，有不少同学会这样写：

❎ Government should encourage commuters to take public transportation, which reduces the number of vehicles running on road, which alleviates the emission problem.

在这句话中，该同学用了两个表示结果的非限定定语从句which叠加，但是在实际写作中，我们需要尽量避免同类语法结构叠加出现。

所以，如果我们在考试时需要写到两个结果，那怎么办呢？

方法有很多，这里黄老师介绍两个最简单的：

1. 介词 to (for)

介词to/for可以引导目的状语，说人话就是表示结果的。

比如上句中，我们可以直接把两个从句合并，这样就变成了：

…, which reduces the number of vehicles running on road to alleviate the emission problem.

同学们不要小看了这个介词短语to的使用，因为在雅思写作中一个非常重要的评分原则为：语言简练度。换句话来说就是，❎ 如果本来简单结构能写完的，非常要写复杂结构。其实不是一件好事。所以to/for的短语可以很好的提升简练度。

语言简练度是一个非常大的知识点，有空黄老师会在后面详细跟大家论述。

2. 复杂并列结构and

同学们千万不要小看and，认为该结构就是apple and banana这类小学生语法。在实际考试中如果能使用出复杂并列的话，是会加不少分的哦。

比如该题，我们同样把两个which从句合并为复杂并列结构：

, which reduces the number of vehicles running on road and alleviates the emission problem.

但是这里同学们要注意，并列结构前后语法对等，所以reduces and alleviates都需要加单三s。

这两个结构不算难，但是都是可以提升语言地道度的结构，同学们如果仔细看雅思写作评分标准，会发现9分语法要求的并不是❎复杂，而是✅地道。所以同学们可以仔细学习上述两个结构，争取在下次考试用出来哦！

最后，黄老师列出了《雅培英语雅思真题范文》中的几个and句型，对应去年的考试真题。同学们可以学习和背诵一下这里的复杂并列用法哦！

复杂并列用法范文

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