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各位学霸们好，今天黄老师跟大家分享一下本周六（2022.3.26）雅思大作文真题范文和解析，本周考题如下：

2022.3.26真题

Some people are reducing their walks; however, many health experts say that walking is the best exercise to maintain health.

Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distances?

题目分析

这道题为典型的report类型题目，对于这类题黄老师想重点说一下解决方案的写法。因为很多同学在写解决方案的时候会错误的写成口号。

比如：

❌ 口号：我们需要保护环境

✅ 方案：我们需要把垃圾分类

这里方案和口号的一个区别就是：可执行性

解决方案是可以被执行的一个具体措施，而口号只是一个方向，是无法被具体执行的。所以，我们再来看这两句话：

❌ 口号：我们需要保护环境（如何保护不知道，无法执行）

✅ 方案：我们需要把垃圾分类（有具体执行动作）

所以，同学们在写类似题目的时候，千万不要把解决方案写成假大空的口号了。

同学们可以对比一下下面两个例子，想想哪个是方案哪个是口号呢？

1.我们需要鼓励人们多坐公交，这样就可以顺带着多走路了。

2.增加公交的班次，车站和打折力度可以鼓励人们多坐公交，这样就可以顺带着多走路了。

同学们可以在评论区打出自己的答案哦，黄老师会给大家反馈的。

另外，这一次的范文黄老师并没有用比较高大上的词，都是非常常用但是又非常地道的书面词汇。这些词都是黄老师从英文期刊的对应文章中积累的，同学们可以感受一下：一篇高分文章不需要出现非常复杂的词汇，用地道的方式呈现常用词汇反而得分更高。

那么，接下来我们一起来看范文吧！（转载请注明出处！！！）

满分词汇&高分段落

2022.3.26真题

Some people are reducing their walks; however, many health experts say that walking is the best exercise to maintain health.

Why do people walk less? What might encourage people to walk longer distances?

满分词汇：

contributor n. （造成某件事的）因素

grocery store n. 杂货店（日常小超市小卖部等）

time-efficient adj. 省时的

daily errands n. 日常杂事

commuter n. 通勤者

concession n. 打折

schedule n. （火车公交地铁等）班次

accessible adj. 容易接触到的

residential zone n. 居民区

utilize v. 利用

原因段1：

One main contributor is that modern life is no longer made for walking. Though it is not the case for everyone, particularly those living dense urban centers, an significant number of nations are car countries: residents drive to work, grocery stores, fitness center and various other places instead of walking. It is primarily because everything isspread out and driving seems to be the only time-efficient way of getting work and daily errands done.

解决段1：

Improving the existing public transportations can promote their usage to commuters, increasing their chance to walk. This can be done through offering more concession tickets, more frequent schedules, and more accessible stops and stations near residential zones, which stimulates the general public to utilize them more frequently and thus facilities walk to those stops and stations and to their final destinations rather than driving directly from home to destination.