PTE2月份新增大作文机经答案,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

各位学霸们好，今天黄老师来分享一下PTE2月份新增的ESSAY大作文机经和答案。

题目分析

最近PTE写作部分（SWT+ESSAY）新增题目较多，黄老师已经全部将其答案收录在《雅培PTE满分答案-3月版》内，需要的学霸请联系黄老师免费领取哦。

另外，对于写作部分的备考思路和机经看法，黄老师想再强调一下：

1. 写作部分的语法至关重要，因为SWT或者ESSAY就算是机经原题，同学们最多也就记住机经中的思路，而不是具体每句话，所以考试时大家还是需要对于文章句子进行删减合并/自己写句子，那么如果语法不过关的话还是有可能出问题的。

2. 语法部分不需要去扩充太多的结构（除非常见的定语状语从句不会写），更多的应该放在纠错上，因为有模版的存在，所以我们并不需要写出特别复杂的句子，但是务必要确保不犯语法错误。

3. 无论是SWT还是ESSAY，黄老师推荐同学们在背诵时都不要死记硬背，理解性记忆即可。因为现在的机经数量较多，全部死背的话根本背不下来。

其中：SWT机经：理解记忆文章的重点句子之间的逻辑关系

ESSAY机经：理解记忆每个观点及展开思路，和对应好词好句

最后，黄老师想强调下，PTE写作部分机经的命中率算是不错的，但是绝对不是100%覆盖（考试全部是机经原题），最多做到100%命中（每次考试至少出现一道原题，但是还有新题），所以同学们千万不要被所谓的‘100%机经原题‘给糊弄了，想通过单纯的背机经就六七八炸是很难的，黄老师推荐同学们还是需要针对自身的弱点对应提升基础 + 练习靠谱模版，这样才能确保万无一失。

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那么，接下来我们来看新增的大作文答案吧！（因为篇幅原因，黄老师列出了部分新增题目，全部高频机经请找黄老师免费领取哦！）

29. In modern society, unemployment among young people is serious problem. Some people think shorten the working (week/time) can address the problem. Do you agree or disagree?

* 注意该题一定要围绕着短期工作来写，最好不要自己想出一种其他的替代方法

论点1: The development of temporary forms of work such as internships, seasonal jobs and short-term contracts can leave young workers in precarious situations in terms of employability.

展开1: Because their jobs are temporary contracts, youth are often the first to be laid off when a company downsizes, and many find themselves unemployed and disadvantaged in searching for another job.

论点2: Flexible contracts with shorter working period can ensure that young people who lack work experience can prove their abilities and skills to progressively transition to regular employment.

展开2: It is seemingly impossible for young labors, who normally lack vocational skills, to secure a decent long-term occupation nowadays, which means such short-term contracts can be acted as a steppingstone for those inexperienced young adults and pave the way for long-term employment.

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30. Should schools have strict rules on wearing uniforms. Do you agree or disagree?

* 该题注意题干中的strict rules，需要对应写出强制性的重要性。

论点1: School uniforms, as the name suggest, create uniformity and a sense of equality.

展开1: Compulsory uniforms eradicate peer pressure to wear the latest, expensive gear from other kids, which means by dressing everyone the same the focus is shifted away from appearance and back to schooling.

论点2: Some people may defend compulsory uniforms on the grounds by requiring students to wear a same uniform it can improve behavior and build spirit.

展开2: Dressing uniformly can develop students’ sense of belonging and therefore potentially imprint the importance of discipline to them, with additional benefit of building the school’s identity in the community.

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31. Should schools make learning a foreign language compulsory? Do you agree or disagree?

* 该题注意题干中的compulsory必须要在文章中对应出，黄老师的范文中没有涵盖该词，同学们可以在模版中加上。

论点1: Learning additional language offers various cognitive benefits besides linguistic merits to children, allowing them to outscore their non-foreign language learning peer in numerous areas.

展开1: It has been confirmed by various longitudinal studies that learning additional languages increase critical thinking skills, creativity and flexibility of the mind in young children.

论点2: Learning an additional language involves memorizing rules and vocabulary, which helps strengthen that mental muscle.

论点2补: Learning a foreign language opens doors that would not otherwise be opened, which means bilingual individuals have access to resources, people, places, and things that the rest of people do not.

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32. It is getting harder for children to live and grow in the 21st century than in the past. Do you agree or disagree?

* 该题的21世纪为一个重要核心词，在文章中间段千万不要遗漏。

论点1: In this century, an increasing number of children are reported to be obese, which is significantly greater than that in previous century, and is strongly associated with recent technologies.

展开1: Nowadays, children who spend more time inside on their phones or tablets fail to spend as much time engaging outdoor activities, which establishes the habit of technology use that doesn’t involve exercise.

论点2: With all the constant immersion in online communication, there are some real concerns about how it impacts childhood development negatively in recent years.

展开2: With more time spent online, young children in this century are having issues with face-to-face social interactions because many seem to prefer to text or talk on social media as opposed to talking to each other in-person. Even when children spend time together, they may spend more time texting or on their phones than actually being together.

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33. Should there be a maximum wage for high pay people?

* 该题的maximum wage黄老师并未写入范文内，同学们可以在模版部分提到该词。

论点1: High-waged celebrities, along with their unattainable lifestyles - snaps of designer clothes, hyper cars or even private jets - are what teenagers nowadays aspire to, which has glorified the wealthy to adolescents by tracking one’s value and worthiness to society solely on its monetary worth.

展开1: Although many of the top athletes, actors and performers deserve their multi-million-dollar pay cheques — most are incredibly talented and diligent, there are also far less paid occupations, such as childcare workers, teachers, nurses, and plenty of other workers, also bring skills and strong work ethics to their respective fields and contribute to the public good.

论点2+展开2: The other very worst thing is that such phenomenon can confuse children success with material wealth, as renowned public figure, because of their massive salaries, will simply, maybe unconsciously, feel that they are worth more, not just in material terms, but in terms of moral value or contribution to society, which can easily be spotted on social media and is extremely misleading to teenagers.

肯定段参考：In our society, the highest paid people are those who know more than the average. They know more of the critical facts, ideas and information than the average person in their field. As a result, they can make a more valuable contribution to a knowledge-based society and live the best life possible. They are valued more, respected more and ultimately paid more money and promoted more often.

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34. What are the advantages and the disadvantages of being over-competitive to individuals (and society)?

* 该题不确定考试是否一定会有社会影响，如果有的话同学们也必须写出社会的影响

论点1: Ambition can transfer to a strong desire to do or to achieve something beyond the everyday tasks of life, which is a great virtue nowadays.

展开1: People who are highly competitive typically persevere until they reach their desired goals, they will not give up easily and study the best of the best in any specified area they are striving to be competitive in so they can also be the top-notch in their field.

论点2: Being competitive also has its disadvantages such as people being labeled as (conceited, self-absorbed, too picky, full of themselves and not being flexible and sometimes passive aggressive 可以任选几个).

展开2: There also can be a positive correlation with anxiety disorder as highly competitive natures tend to stress some people out if they fail to win, as these persons generally do not know how to channel their losses and use it as a learning lesson instead of a defeat.

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35. Do you think learning a foreign language is still necessary with artificial intelligence translation?

* 该题论点较长，故黄老师未写展开，同学们选取论点核心词和思路进行背诵即可

论点1: Although AI translation tools are great for self-study and for use as classroom aids, a lot of the time the translations they produce need to be checked by a real person as they sometimes make obvious mistakes, which renders foreign language study still necessary.

论点1-延伸：They also lack the human element; while one is travelling abroad they can be very useful in emergency situations – for example when it is needed to look up a word or order something from the pharmacy, but it is not easy to build relationships and survive using only digital translators.

论点2: Language learning help guide students and give them the cultural background in a way that a computer cannot.