【PTE写作】套模版大作文分数还是低？,IPENGLISH黄老师微信公众号文章

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各位学霸们好，欢迎来到雅培英语PTE小讲堂，今天黄老师跟大家来分享一下PTE写作大作文ESSAY的提分小技巧。

提分技巧

首先，我们需要纠正一个PTE大作文的备考误区，很多人会认为PTE大作文 = ❌ 模版 + 填废话词，比如:

A recent research conducted by MIT university clearly indicates

that there are some severe implications of (重复题目词).

这类模版一般都号称’无脑满分模版’，但是实际情况确是套了这个模版的同学分数高低浮动非常大（40分-80分），其原因就是模版中的’重复题目词’出问题了。

很多同学会认为：❌ 电脑也不知道我写的是什么，所以我乱写它也不知道。但是其实不是的，电脑在识别同学们的用词时，会判断该词和题目话题的关联性。而这里关联词 ≠ 题目原词！！！

比如题目为环境问题environment类的，那么：

❌ A recent research conducted by MIT university clearly indicates

that there are some severe implications of (environment).

评判：题目无关词 + 题目原词 = 低分

我们如果想拿到一个更高的分数，则✅ 一定要在文章内尽可能多的出现和题目话题有关联的词，比如：

✅ A recent research conducted by MIT university clearly indicates

that there are some severe implications of (global warming).

但是，如果要拿到PTE大作文的高分，❌ 远不是模版里随便写一个和话题有关的词就OK，我们还需要考虑下面几件事：

1. 关联词出现的次数必须足够多（最好均匀分布）

2. 关联词重复的次数必须少

3. 关联词书面度和复杂度需要高

所以，同学们最好能够选择合适模版（不能废话太多），同时对于高频写作话题记忆高分关联词（词汇储备不够的同学可以背诵《雅培英语PTE满分答案-10月版》，包含全话题满分关联词哦！）。

最后，黄老师附上近期高频的5篇大作文范文段落，同学们可以重点记忆其中关联词哦！

近期高频大作文范文段落

21. Some university deduct student’s marks if they submit their assignments late. Do you think it is wise to do it and what other suggestions do you have?

* 该题可以考虑写分类结论，即依照正当理由决定是否扣分

论点1：Applying penalty for late submission is a form of justification of academic integrity and fairness.

展开1：Those who submit overdue assignment can enjoy an extended period of time for their works, which allows them to have comparative advantage in punctuating more details in their papers. If such circumstances are allowed to occur, there will be no credit for university’s grading system.

论点2：Applying mark deduction for all late submission without any exception seems to be inhuman in some cases.

展开2：Although in most cases late submission is due to laziness, a number of universities still offer pre-approved extension for assignments with justifiable excuses, including sick leave or other force majeures.

秒懂逻辑：学术公平 + 不可抗力理由【正反各一边】

22. Hosting international sports events such as Olympics and the World Cup can bring benefits to the host countries. How far do you agree or disagree with the statement?

* 该题可以写一边倒结构；较为好写

论点1：international sports event can largely facilitate the local economy of its host country.

展开1：For example, it is extremely common in present days that although holding multinational sports competitions requires a sheer amount of money as preliminary for a nation, it brings considerably more profit because it acts as an engine for development through foreign exchange earnings and the creation of direct and indirect employment.

论点2：international sports events can act as a carrier of culture dissemination of its hosting countries.

展开2：To further support the above statement, compared with organizing local sports events, which attract merely local spectators, major international sports events such as Olympics set the stage for spreading unique local culture of the hosting nation to the globe because local heritage can be presented during opening and closing ceremony through various specular cultural activities.

秒懂逻辑：促进经济 +文化传播【一边倒】

23. Do you think company of consumer goods should focus on long-term reputation or short-term strategies?

* 该题可以最后一段比较（但是不论证，较为简单）；也可以在中间段直接比较+论证（较难）

* 该题例子为中间段比较论证的写法，同学们考试时可以自行选择

论点1：Short-term marketing activities can effectively produce temporary boost in sales number.

展开1：By providing incentive to customers, such as free trail, coupons, offers or discounts, these sales promotions can infuse immediate revenue into a business by encouraging potential consumers to notice a specific promoted product among its competitors and eventually make a purchase.

论点2：Diverting the bulk of marketing spend away from long-term brand building and towards short-term, sales-driven targets may lead to visibly lower overall returns in the long run.

展开2：This is because it weakens brand image, which sustain long-term business performance, and also weakens the ability of organizations to build trust because as trust and reputation are inexorably linked.

秒懂逻辑：虽然短期促销有好处 + 但是长期品牌建立的好处更大

24. What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students learning plays centuries ago?

* 该题涉及词汇较难，黄老师推荐同学们仔细背诵下列词汇

优点1：The dazzling thought-world of the classic plays, which used to be restricted to the privileged few, give students ideas of civilization and happiness.

展开1：The participant will have the chance to meet the giants of human civilization through dialogue accompanied by a presentation of theatrical plays along with the importance of the Greek tragedy, a form of writing that had the ability to stare at the abyss of the human soul.

优点2：Great ancient literature has the power to give adolescents meaningful interpretations of our current reality, nurturing their various abilities.

展开2：Classics is a wide-ranging discipline, which incorporates elements of history, archaeology, art, religion, mythology, philosophy, gender and queer studies, and numerous other disciplines. These classes enable students to develop greater life skills such as perspective, cultural understanding and creativity.

缺点1：Force-feeding classical plays normally result in low numbers of students taking part, particularly in senior year levels because teachers choose repertoire dull literature that is not of interest to the students.

缺点2：Also, study of ancient plays reduces teenager’s play time, which affects emotional development and leads to the rise of anxiety, depression, and problems of attention and self-control.

秒懂逻辑：教授文化 + 培养其他能力 + 参与度低 + 影响玩耍时间

25. More and more women are raising a family with a career. Please give your opinion on personal level and national level.

* 该题注意个人角度和国家角度需要各写一个点

论点1：Having a career compatible with raising children allows women to be financially independent and allows the family to afford quality childcare. (该点也可以替换成avoid isolation or depression with a more active social relationship)

展开1：Being a full-time housewife means the whole family will be dependent on a single source income from husband, which is, in many cases, insufficient to sustain the daily expense of the family.

论点2：Married women can drive the increase of female labor force in a country, greatly contributing to the sustainable development of a society.

展开2：Young mothers, many of whom are well trained with a high degree of professional skills, can compensate for the talent shortage in a sheer number of occupations. These women can bring their valuable assets to a wide spectrum of fields, ranging from technology, education, to government sectors, generating countless tangible or intangible profits for a nation.

秒懂逻辑：个人家庭更多财富+国家就业经济变好