【雅思写作7分神器】良心贴！~5分钟，手把手教你搞定雅思写作

2014年11月27日 无忧小雅哥

<剑桥【9】时代>
雅思7分写作最佳结构
类型一 同意/不同意
To what extent do you agree or disagree? /Do you agree or disagree? /what's your opinion?
最佳文章结构
Introduction= paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.
(Please do not write any unnecessary sentence, e.g. with the development of modern technologies...)
例题: 《剑桥9》 Test 2 Task 2 Page 54
Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programs (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?
例文: Page 165
It has been suggested that high school students should be involved in unpaid community services as a compulsory part of high school programs. (复述题目,介绍背景) Most of the colleges are already providing opportunities to gain work experience, however these are not compulsory. In my opinion, sending students to work in community services is a good idea as it can provide them with many lots of valuable skills. ( 给出自己观点,清晰,观点明确的是达到7分的必要条件.)
Body=topic sentence + explanation
Paragraph 1 = the point you do not agree (Against)
第一段写你所不同意的所要反驳的观点.
Paragraph 2 = the point you agree (For)
第二段写你所支持的观点.
（Please write your opinion as FIRST sentence of the paragraph. 不要在段落末尾才点明自己观点,这样考官会在Task Response方面扣分.)
例题: 《剑桥9》Page 165
By giving them compusory work activities with charitable or community organisations,they will be encouraged to do something more creative. (主题句, 清晰的表明段落观点, Task Response分会很高.)
Skills gained through compulsory work will not only be an asset on their CV but also increase their employability. (展开解释自己观点, 描述的更完整, 显得论点论据更为可信.)

如果你是写一边倒的文章, 每一段只能描述一个观点理由.
For instance, you totally disagree with the point, it should be:
Introduction: I completely disagree with this point of view because.....
Body paragraph 1: the first reason is:
Body paragraph 2: the second one is:
Body paragraph 3: xxx is the third one.

Conclusion=Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above
写完所有的Body Paragraph，conclusion不能不写。
Conclusion不需要太过复杂和繁琐，只需要有一种新的表达方式来复述题目，并且总结一下自己写得观点就已经足够了。
类型二 双边给出观点
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
最佳文章结构
Introduction= paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.

Body=topic sentence + explanation
一定一定要讨论两个观点，两个观点都要提到，不然Task Response会扣分，会偏题。因为题目的要求是“Discuss both views and give your own opinion”
Paragraph 1 = the point you do not agree (Against)
Paragraph 2 = the point you agree (For)

Conclusion=Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above
类型三 问题-解决
What’s the causes and effect of this issue? /why is this case？And what solutions can be done?
最佳文章结构
Introduction= paraphrase the topic + give your own opinion.
不管哪一种类型的文章，introduction的写法都是大同小异的。引出题目背景，表达自己观点，2-3句话就已足够。

Body paragraph 1 =Reason 1 + explanation + Reason 2 + explanation
此类文章可以在一段内写2-3个可能造成这个现象的理由，也可以把理由分开成几段来写，比如：
Body paragraph 1 =Reason 1 + explanation
Body paragraph 2 =Reason 2 + explanation

写完Reason之后，文章要求写相应的影响或者解决方法，这个时候可以用一段来写2-3个影响或解决办法，不用特地一 一分段来写。
Body paragraph 2 =Effect / Solution 1 + explanation + Effect / Solution 2 + explanation

Conclusion=Restate the topic in another way + summary your opinion mentioned above and possible solutions or effect.
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