When it was
Where it happened
What you did at the end
开头：直接说明这是一次不愉快的黄山之旅，因为天气的变化给旅行造成不便。
事情经过：在2,、3年前，我和妈妈、哥哥一起去黄山游玩，但是我们遇上了暴风雨。因为没有带伞，我们被淋成了落汤鸡（be absolutely soaked）,缆车也因为不安全而关闭了。
事情结果：只能走下山，下山之后也打不到车，我们浑身湿透了，筋疲力尽（completely drenched and utterly exhausted）。
最后结尾时，再谈谈对这次经历的感受，从中学到些什么。
Well, one particularly unpleasant experience that sticks in my memory was the time I visited one famous mountain in China with my mum and brother, it must be about 2 or 3 years ago.
And basically what happened was that we got caught in a big storm, which seemed to spring up out of nowhere, because one minute it was pretty sunny, and the next it was raining cats and dogs. At the time the storm hit, we were right on top of the mountain, and because we hadn't checked the weather forecast, we didn't take umbrella with us, and we got absolutely soaked! And the worst thing was, when we reached the cable car to get down the mountain, we were told that it had closed for the concern of safety. Due to the story lightening, apparently taking the cable car wasn't safe.
So we ended up having no choice but to walk down the mountain instead, and because it was still raining when we got to the bottom, we couln't find a single free taxi. So there we were, completely drenched and utterly exhausted, stuck in the middle of nowhere.
Thankfully,though, after what seemed like an ternity, a minivan finally pulled up and gave us a lift back to where we were staying, which was a huge relief. Truly, I would say I actually gained quite a lot from this experience, you know, being well prepared before going on a trip, never ever forgetting to check the weather forecast.
