雅思写作大作文锦集

2015年12月09日 Unipassyouyue



长期奋战在烤鸭的一线的的小伙伴们对作文的类型其实并不陌生大作文的类型。可是如何达到7分确是难上难,到达8分更是难于上青天哟。

于是小编总结一些大作文的类型题,与大家一起共勉之。


大作文的类型包括以下三类其实大家并不陌生

辩论型:to what extent & discuss both views

报告型:why, what, how

混合型


举个例子说明更恰当:

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

提示:1.针对辩论型to what extent的第二句,宜直接回答同意与否或同意的程度,不宜暧昧。

2.针对辩论型discuss both views的第二句,宜直接描述自己的观点,不需要写同意哪一个。

3.针对报告型的两个问题,第二句用and将自己的两个观点连起来即可。不需要写第三句。

2. 如何写好 辩论型to what extent的主体段

主体段:两段。两段的重点最好有所侧重,如第一段是关于为什么一定要纳税;第二段则是重点阐述纳税的好处。

第一段第一句为该段主题句,其余每句皆围绕主题句展开,不得跑火车

如何拓展观点:如第一段是关于为什么一定要纳税。写一个理由就行了,两个也可。

方法:

主题句:Paying such taxes is officially required by law for every single familyy (这里举例,先不理会文采).

展开时,可用一句话将理由写明白点:More specifically, this is because as citizens, parents have the legal obligation to pay taxes for the sake of bettering the whole education quality.

第二句再加个对比 It is true that choosing what kind of school for children is their personal freedom, but this right itself will never compensate the duty from law. 其实等于一个理由换个方式说两遍。

第三句就可以加个条件,虚拟一下后果: If families refused to pay the relevant taxes, they would have to suffer legal consequences.

写到这里加上主题句已经四句了,如果觉得还不够,还可以加个例子:For example, penalties including heavy fines and temporary detention may apply.

第二段拓展观点:如第二段则是重点阐述纳税的好处。和第一段也是一样的方法,当然建议好处写两个以上。

1 Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

提示:

主体段:两段。由于题目前半句和后半句有因果逻辑,所以我们第二段先针对前半句,第三段再针对后半句。

1.如何写好 辩论型discuss both views的主体段

Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

提示:

主体段:两段。这里两个观点说哪个合理都没问题。第一段建议先写反对的观点,但并不需要在这一段彻底反对这个观点,而是可以先写其合理之处。第二段再写你认同的观点。这里以同意第二个观点为例子

第一段第一句为该段主题句,其余每句皆围绕主题句展开。由于这个观点你并不同意,所以不宜写strict punishments的多种优点,着重描写一点即可。

主题句之后,第一句建议可先写strict punishments的出发点/目的(They can serve as a deterrent / precaution)。第二句可介绍strict punishments的类型。第三句写其取得的效果。第四句再加个转折:然而,这效果并不理想(为下段铺垫)。

第二段第一句为该段主题句,同时承接上一段最后一句,如Instead of only trying to use heavy punishments, in my view, there are diverse steps that could be taken together to minimize the possibility of traffic accidents.

由于原题中说other measures,因此这段可以描写两到三种方法,每种方法展开写一到两句即可,可写目的/优点/效果等等。

2. 如何写好报告型大作文的主体段:

Happiness is considered very important in life.
Why is it difficult to define?
What factors are important in achieving happiness?

提示:

因为有两个问题,所以没什么好纠结的。第一段回答第一个问题,第二段回答第二个问题。两个问题问的方面不同,所以两段的回答也不需要有太多相呼应的地方。

但有一点要注意:第一个段写的是不同,即different people tend to have differing definition about happiness. 主要内容是写为什么不同。而第二段却要写相同,就是achieving happinesscommon factors。所以要避免全文出现逻辑错误:比如第一段写了有人觉得幸福和财富完全没关系,第二段却写了经济上的满足最容易让人快乐。

3.如何写好混合型大作文的主体段:

Punishment is necessary to help children learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age.

To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach children?

提示:问题一是辩论型题目,问题二是问solution. 压缩辩论部分即可

同时要注意的是该问题的逻辑:第二个问题是问什么类型的punishment应该被允许,所以问题已经默认了punishment 并非一无是处。所以在你对问题一进行辩论的时候要选好方向。可以一边倒写punishment非常有用,但不要一边倒写punishment毫无用处。


例文详细剖析:

Wild animals have no place in the 21st century, so protecting them is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary society, some people claim that it has been unnecessary for us to continue the protection of wild animals because they are no longer important. Personally, I don’t subscribe to this view at all.

From my perspective, it is pointless to assume that these animals have lost their positions in this century. More specifically, I believe all species are supposed to share the common right with us to live on Earth, a plant where they have existed for millions of years①⑤. There is no convincing reason why we, as humankind, have just been given a new privilege to encourage the extinction of any of them now①. Meanwhile, today we are better off in terms of technology advances associated with the sustainable development, which means we are more capable of producing sufficient food and maintaining the current environment without having to further sacrifice wild animals’ living conditions, especially their natural habitats.

The opinion that wildlife protection is resource-wasting also fails to hold water⑤. Every species of wild animals plays a significant role in the ecosystem where we are part of as well①. The extinction of any one of them would potentially create negative impacts on the rest including human race, if we failed to provide the appropriate protection②. In this case, it is our government that④ needs to take the responsibility, sparing no effort to ensure the survival of endangered animals by taking all effective measures such as relevant policy enforcements, whereas each individual must raise the awareness of the importance of their existence⑦.

In conclusion, regardless of that③ some opinions are against wildlife protection, what I insist is that⑥ we should never hesitate to support that with necessary resources.

1. 定语从句(非which的),适用时机:

提到机构(school, department, government, etc)或环境(Earth, habitat, workplace, etc)或原因(reason, factor, etc)时,如

2. 条件状语从句+虚拟语气,适用时机:

展开某支持的观点的时候,用来虚拟后果(如果不这样做的话),如

3. 让步状语从句,适用时机:

开头段或结尾段对比立场时,如

4. 强调句,适用时机:

提到机构、个人需要采取行动时, 如

5. 同位语从句,适用时机:

提到某观点、建议、地点、群体、个体、事实(opinion, suggestion, fact, etc), 如

6. 主语从句,适用时机:

表达观点时(what I believe, why it is necessary, etc),如

7. 擅用while,适用时机:

开头段或结尾段对比立场时(有让步成分),提到两个群体所采取的措施时,如,这时while=whereas

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