最近大家有好好写作文嘛?
Hope老师针对本月最后一场雅思考试又给大家写了一篇
7分范文
小板凳们搬起来围观哟
Over the last half century the gap between the wealthy and the poor has changed beyond our wildest expectations. This has been driven by technological breakthroughs that are changing the whole way we earn money on an almost daily basis. This means that technological advances have not increase the gap, but is diminishing it.
Those people who believe technological advances give a rise to the gap between the rich and the poor ignore direct causes of such trend. Although they believe there is a wider range of income variety between different social groups than ever before due to the usage of technology, they hardly realize such advances have created equal education opportunities to everyone all cross the world. As an illustration, children who live in the rural areas can use the Internet to receive an adequate education like others. Such education backgrounds they achieve are essential for getting a reasonable career with an average salary.
The reason for positive technological effects on narrowing the gap of income difference extends beyond promoting the education equality. As the widespread of the Internet, many new jobs with tremendous income are created to be available to everyone no matter how poor the financial condition their families are. Game streamers, for example, can earn over ten-thousand US dollars each month by playing a certain online computer game, by recording the playing process and by posting these videos online. YouTubers, another good example of such jobs, also earn lot through posting videos recording their skills online to attract more subscribers. Altogether, the big money come from these new jobs narrows down the gap between rich and poor individuals.
看完了吗?
赶紧试着自己写一篇哦!
为了更有针对性地帮助大家解决写作上所遇到的难题,环球教育推出了
写作批改卡!
所有的写作题目都由环球教育资深写作老师精心准备,并按次给同学布置作文题目。当学生完成后,再由老师精细地批改。每次的作文批改不仅会纠正同学们语言上的不足,最重要的是,会指出文章中逻辑、思路和结构的缺陷。
具体的写作批改形式是这样滴:
写作批改卡可根据同学们的不同需求,按次进行批改,并且更有限时优惠活动等着大家!
欢迎随时戳我们的环球小姐姐进行咨询哦~~
环球雅思 想你所想
墨尔本环球雅思为你保驾护航
环球雅思6分/7分金牌保分班
基础保分5分班
PTE全能班
生活英语,VCE,AEAS
学习遇到困难?
需要专业的老师指导?
想要我们的王牌讲师帮你答疑解惑?
请扫下方二维码!快快联系“环球雅思姐”
地址:level 8, 170 Queen Street, Melbourne 3000