移居国外的优点和缺点是什么?高频ESSAY思路详解

原创 2019年03月04日 7PLUS英语


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高频ESSAY讲解


这篇文章将分析一道最近的高频写作真题,并给出一篇范文供大家参考。

 

首先,大家需要知道的是,PTE的写作部分作答时间为20分钟,在这段时间内,大家需要好好审题,理清思路,并想好适当的观点及例子来支持自己的观点。如果我们能把大部分高频题目都理一遍思路并想好适当的表达。我们考试的时候遇见原题或类似的题目时便会游刃有余。

 

以下是这篇写作的题目:

 

Many people choose to migrate to other countries.What are the advantages and disadvantages of living in a foreign country? Discuss with your own experience.

 

遇到这道题,我们需要首先分析题目问得是什么,往往一些同学因为没有好哈审题便直接开始写作,可能会导致所问非所答,文章逻辑不清。对于这类同学,一定要提高审题能力,如果需要可以将题目翻译为中文,方便理解。

 

这道题的翻译如下:

 

很多人选择移民到其他国家。结合自己的经历,在外国居住的优点和缺点分别是什么?

 

首先大家一定要认识到,这个题是一个传统的Advantage and Disadvantage的题目,因此在这个题目中,我们必须同时讨论这一现象的优点及缺点。在这个题目中同学们不能单纯谈优点或缺点。与此同时,题目还要求我们必须结合自己的经历,所以在主体段的论证过程中,一定要写出自己自身的例子。

 

下面给大家提供一些写作思路,并给出一篇范文。

Advantage

·          Multicultural society

·          Broader career options

·          Improve financial situation

·          Enjoy better social welfare

·          Have a positive effect on  globalization

Disadvantage

·          Cultural conflict

·          Language barrier

·          Bad influence on family relationship

·          Increase opportunities of  depression

 

下面我们给出一篇这个题目的范文:

As the world integrates, the proliferation of migration has became a prevalent topic for fierce discuss. Yet at the same time, various issues have arisen, a serious one of which is migrating or living in a foreign country is a blessing or cruse. In my opinion, I think the advantages of migration overweigh the disadvantages.

 

Admittedly, moving to a foreign country provide a border career options to individuals. According to a research from Monash University, people who immigrate to a new country have sixty percent more career choices than those who just stay in their homeland. For example, after migrating to a new country and getting the permission to work in the foreign country, I am able to legally work in both their home country and the new ones. As a result, I enjoy morework opportunities compared with my counterparts in my hometown. Thus, choosing to live in a new country has a positive effect on people’s career development.

 

Moreover, it is no doubt that immigrating to a country without any preparation may lead to cultural conflicts for new migrants. More specifically, having no understanding about the culture and customs of the target state, new comers may find it difficult to merge with local society and communicate with people from different backgrounds. For instance, when I went to Australia, I did not have enough knowledge about the multicultural society here, so when I tried to interact with my classmate, I used to have some behaviors that were regarded as impolite.Therefore, migrating may also cause cultural conflicts.

 

In conclusion, although migrating to a new country can rise cultural conflicts, I still believe that it offers more benefits, including increasing number of job opportunities.

 

以上便是目的一篇范文。同学型的候一定要多写,多。因想出的点不一定都能写出来,遇到表达困候需要多相关料,多与老与同学交流,找出最适合自己的观点。


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