2022年6月4日雅思大作文真题范文:历史类难题!

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今天黄老师给大家带来上周六的雅思大作文真题范文,考题如下:


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真题分析

2022.6.4真题

It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


这道题话题较难,对于历史文化类的话题很多同学会完全写不出高分词汇,所以黄老师强烈推荐同学们仔细积累下面范文中的好词好句,如果考到类似题目一定能用上的。


对于该类题目,同学们切忌不要写假大空的论点,比如:

❎ 拓宽视野 broaden horizon

❎ 增长知识 gain knowledge

不只是这道题,对于其他题目黄老师也推荐同学们少写这些‘废话’论点,因为几乎所有话题都可以套入这些论点,所以他们的得分也很低。


对于历史类题目,黄老师推荐同学们可以往以下几个思路构思:

✅ 培养文化认同(正)- national identity

✅ 培养逻辑思维(正)- logical thinking

✅ 工作不实用(反)- little practical use


上述这些高分思路都需要同学们有一个很强的词汇储备。那么,接下来我们就一起来看黄老师范文是怎么使用地道词句的吧:

(范文内词句均由黄老师从英文期刊杂志中摘抄积累而来,同学们可以放心使用,均为母语者地道书面表达。)


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满分词汇及高分段落


2022.6.4真题

It is more important for school children to learn about local history than world history. To what extent do you agree or disagree?


满分词汇:

academic value n. 学术价值

utilize v. 利用

nurture v. 培养

play a prominent role v. 扮演了一个显著的角色

national identity n. 国家意识

school curriculum n. 学校科目

ethnicity n. 种族 

rounded adj. 全面的


Local history has clear academic value. It can provide a depth study in a way that would be impossible with a national topic, utilizing and developing children’s source skills and knowledge, as well as offering clear benefits in terms of nurturing empathy and logical thinking. Furthermore, national history has long played a prominent role in the forging of national identities for its learners, which renders it rather essential in school curriculum. 


On the other hand, learning important historical events that have occurred globally can help make young people more aware of other cultures and people with various ethnicities. It can also help develop critical thinking about society and the world. The rich history of the world helps children to paint a detailed picture of where they stand today, which makes them more rounded people who are better prepared to learn all their academic subjects.





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