雅思小作文通常来说是很简单的，只需要掌握很少的点，就可以获得高分，还可以拉高写作整体的分数。超级赞滴。
学习小作文需要注意的要点是什么呢？
百分数的表达 %
百分数的表达，最大的问题，就是会丢三落四。
“多少百分数的人”，只有一种表达的基本形态，就是
20% of people
20 percent of people
其他的，只要根据需要，稍加变形就好啦～
举个例子：9分范文
题目：
开头段：
The table compares two primary schools in terms of the proportions of their pupils who experienced seven different educational problems in the years 2005 and 2015.
拿来我们的基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
看文章中的变形：
proportions of pupils
proportion = percent
趋势段：
It is noticeable that school A had higher proportions of children with all seven educational difficulties in both years.
However, while school A managed to reduce the incidence of most of the problems between 2005 and 2015, school B saw an overall rise in the percentage of children who were struggling.
基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
文章中的变形：
higher proportions of children
the percentage of children
主体段1，第1句话：
In 2005, 42% of school A’s pupils found it difficult to follow instructions, whereas only 6% of pupils in school B experienced this problem.
基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
文章中的变形：
42% of school A’s pupils
6% of pupils
主体段1，第2句话：
Similarly, between 30 and 40 per cent of children attending school A had problems in the areas of spelling, listening, verbal expression and concentration in lessons, while the equivalent figures for school B stood at between 5 and 15 per cent.
基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
文章中的变形：
between 30 and 40 per cent of children
主体段2，第1句话：
In 2015, the difference between the two schools was less pronounced. Notably, the proportion of children who struggled to follow instructions fell by 24% in school A, and this school also saw falls of 22%, 15%, 14% and 5% in the figures for children who had problems with concentration, listening, verbal expression and spelling.
基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
文章中的变形：
the proportion of children
主体段2，第2句话：
In school B, however, the proportion of children who struggled with spelling and following instructions doubled, to 10% and 12% respectively, and there was almost no change in the incidence of listening, verbal or concentration problems.
基本形态：
20% of people
20 percent of people
文章中的变形：
the proportion of children
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